TTRT 45 Pre Beta
Added 2022-05-25 02:47:19 +0000 UTCHere's das juicy chapter everyone! Enjoy! It's a bit late here and I'm getting tired so I'll keep this message short.
I still have a couple of omakes to add to this one when I finally post it, but otherwise, let me know what you think. I went full blown mind fk at a few points.
Comments
Hey new the community here love your stuff freaking Binged it.. I think it would make a better story than the original anime but that just shows to go we all love naruto. Good parts all around love that I can't tell whether or not they're p***** or actually concerned for naruto for once at the end. The visual description of the sky mother being basically an infinite dragon of universe is freaking amazing and would look awesome I think. I think it would be funny for a side story if you flipped script and had ghost basically Blueball anko and hana. I know it's part of the dynamic and they love. I just think it would be funny to see the other side. Also this may seem a little salty but can you please have naruto? Just beat the the crap out of either Ino or Sakura. I get that he loves hinata and kind of let's hear run the show for a little bit. But the love is there. The others treat him like a doormat and he just needs to wail on them They literally torture him. He has fast healing not Immunity to pain every bonebreak every step every stab every poison he feels the pain and that's a version of torture. P S hoping this continues for a while fan of your stuff good work keep it up god bless.
Zachary Rothschild
2023-05-29 23:10:09 +0000 UTCWell it"s so awesome . The view of the Kage on the horrors and wonders of the multiverse and yet funny enough i see some aspects of those monstruosity that could be replicated in the Shinobi World thanks to their inhabitual flexibility . I mean the shinobi world could (if given time enough ) turn into a technological advanced civilization if given time matching SF civilisation , Will they not having yet an entire population being consacred to self-development , energy manipulation and mass-scale training with physical oriented and mental training , they do have institution meant for the long-term development . The only thing they don't have is not enough people reaching the level of Akatsuki , Bijuu or Hashirama . If say having a few thousands peoples having access this kind of firepower . I'm pretty sure the technological advanced civilizations that will knock at their door will be saying big no when they see a few thousands peoples capables each to blow up cities , mountains or other landscape . If we take into account Boruto series , we know the shinobi civilization is in the pass of becoming a arcanotechnological civilization using chakra instead of magic with application of science . I could see a lot of potential for going in . The quesion that i still asking myself , how the TRTT Narutoverse will evolve to be able to meet the standard of the multiverse ? So does Kerrigan have noticed the change in Naruto ? Is she impressed for someone that young reaching that kind of level of power ? Does that mean we have already the word of the Fiasco of Iwa being recognize in the multiversal political scenes .
Eaglestorm27
2022-05-25 06:56:43 +0000 UTC
