TTRT 43 Pre Beta
Added 2022-01-31 02:52:06 +0000 UTCHallo everybody! Itsa me... that guy!
New chapter for all of you and... okay, gonna be honest, I'm still having thoughts about this one. Lots of Naruto talking and trying to establish what he's trying to do. Lots of surprises all across the board, but for some reason I feel like none of them actually hit as hard as they should be. Tell me what you think if you could. I might seriously rework this thing if enough people feel the same.
On a side note. Pokemon Arceus is good. And its a thing. And I may enjoy pelting small animals with my balls far more than I should.
Comments
I'm very impressed about this chapter . It show how politics works especially with the superhuman which the Shinobi are . I love how Naruto put the elemental nation on the map . Correctly if i'm wrong but in the Naruto movie The last we see the continent and it"s pretty big . So either the World of Naruto is big or the elemental Nations is small , which surprised me considering they have deserts and different landscape . So Naruto want to fund and build a special village dealing with dimensions . Remind me of other organizations seen in other universes (XCOM , SCP Foundation , The HXH association , Men in Black organization and so on . ) Question how powerful Naruto will be if he enters to Sage mode now that he is in upper end of Holy rank A . Who stop the other villages to not sending spies to steal valuable piece of information on technology and training method ? Perhaps Naruto and the Kage will make an agreement about the training facilites like once someone retired he will join a special academy to train every shinobi conscripted . I don't know .
Eaglestorm27
2022-02-01 16:57:02 +0000 UTCI think it's a good chapter. It has it's problems, mainly because it's been so much buildup - to "conclude" that with a talking/exposition chapter is always difficult. You just have to get it out of the way. Do agree with Andrevius though - it's strange that the leaders of the shinobi villages didn't connect the dots with regards to Ghost. Might've been some extra tension in an otherwise "relaxed" chapter. One more point of interest: I think the Raikage is, as of this moment at least, very one dimensional. Don't know how you'd be able to fix that, but it seems as though he's the main and only point of pushback for Naruto right now, and he does so at every turn.
Cainthedream
2022-01-31 14:59:44 +0000 UTC
