Lara's Capture Part 03 Audio VA WIP

Thanks for you messages and feedbacks ^^. In fact this awkward fucked up face was intended (although I tried to not make it too difficult to watch). You know she has been through a lot lately....

Great job dude. sounds sick, I had to listen to it a few times but its sick. Maybe dimming the male entities voice slimly a bit as it kind of overwhelms the female but I don't know, I'm sure it will make sense when the full clip comes out. I couldn't get the full context of what was being said honestly.

Darkman298

I really don't wanna hound your work at all cause its great, but one thing I might think of in the future for similar work, is Tifa's smiles, it gets just a bit to uneasy(creepy) like I get that she's fucked up, I don't know if anyone else would feel this way, just thought I should mention just for future productions. Maybe pull it back a little. Just my opinion.

Darkman298

Absolutely, right now I have a 6 pages document describing my universe and it's growing ^^. For Lara not so much, at least not now, I know approximately what happen to her but I'll move to another part of this universe for the next big project. (Maybe some little things here ad there but nothing big and soon). Hooo thank you! This is really nice to read, it's so cool and motivating that some people notice all the details I try to put in my work *-*. And I added even more little things for the final version ;) . And I must say I love watching Pixar and other big animation productions for that too ^^.

Yes, I am just barely able to make out the first line now that I know the translation. Thanks for providing it. Another question: have you already established the backstory? In particular, have you defined what The Entity is and what it does? Do you have plans for a followup story that shows what happens to Lara after this story? Another observation: I've been watching the video closely and I must say, I am astounded that you've been able to put together ten minutes of such high-quality animation in less than a year -- especially because it's full of tiny touches that really bring it to life. Examples: Tifa's eyes shifting as she torments Lara; she's saying, "Watch what I'm about to do now!" Or the way Lara's body bounces in response to Tifa's thrusts. I thought sure that I could find some small oversight in what is a very complex physical action, but I never saw any such failure. Also striking was the way that Lara's lower legs bounce up in response to Tifa's thrusts when Lara is face down on the floor. I'm really enjoying these fine touches. I love to watch Pixar films for the same kind of thing: tiny details that few people would notice, yet add so much depth to the presentation.

First line : "Back at last, you took your time Tifa" Can you ear it knowing what it says ^^?

Thank you a lot *-*! It was almost my first time doing that and it took me 2 days XD. But now I know how to do it ^^. You understood well the "Anyway" congrats, and I still wanted it to be understandable in a way and I think it will be when you'll know what it says ^^.

I too was unable to understand all but one word: "Anyway" -- either I got it wrong or it seems rather undemonic. 😛 In any case, if your goal is for it to sound demonic, why bother using English? Use something really alien. I am very much impressed by the overlap of multiple sound tracks, including the deep male, the high female, and that third echo-like track. Very impressive work.

Thanks for them ^^. A few weeks I think, still a lot of frames to render ^^'.

Amazing work! How long until full video with sound?

Max Redhart

Thank you! Haha yeah sorry about that, if it was more understandable it wouldn't be as creepy and daemonic but I think I'll add subtitles ^^.

Yeah I didn't want this thing to be identified as male or female because it is none of them and in a certain way it is both and even more... But well that seemed like a good compromise ^^.

Sounds great! Though I'm legit having a hard time understanding about 80 percent of what the Entity is saying ;P

CAsh

They sound AMAZING!!! I am surprised by the entity to sound both male and female :D

Mr. J