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Mechanic Girlfriend Repairs You [Full 18+ Version][Fem 4 Fem][Non-specified Genitals]

Hey Everyone this is my first one of these so any and all feedback, suggestions, and criticisms are welcome!

Mechanic Girlfriend Repairs You [Full 18+ Version][Fem 4 Fem][Non-specified Genitals]

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This advice is excellent thank you so much! I’ve been doing my own foley for most of the sound effects so i think i was getting lazy reusing the same sound cuz i didn’t want to get another good one but ill try to get some more variations to reduce the repetition! and yeah the sound mixing i was struggling with your advice helps a ton thank you!

Rose Waltz

Hey! I do audio production and editing as a job (and one of my frequent clients does erotic audio so I've got several years of experience with these types of files ^^), so I thought I'd respond to your request for feedback and give you a few technical notes - I think your sound effects are a little too loud compared to your voice, you want your voice to be the loudest part of the recording with everything else lower in the mix so the listener can establish a comfortable volume within the first minute or so of listening (even though in reality, of course a drill or a mechanical spark would be louder than your voice :P). As for the sound effects themselves, I recommend trying to vary your sounds a little, for example when the listener rings the bell or your character is removing the back plate it's obviously the same sound effect repeated, whereas in reality each drill would be slightly longer/shorter and have slightly different timing, pitch, panning etc. You don't have to go overboard with it because it doesn't take much to trick an ear - your instinct might be to find 4 different drill sounds for each screw, but if you have two which you alternate with slightly different timing and volumes it'll sound a lot more natural than one sound repeated. Honestly I'm not sure how much an untrained ear notices or cares, but in my case it takes me out of the recording a little so I work according to my own ear. Aside from that and a few other things I could nit-pick you do a great job with the character you're playing and you're definitely a natural at this. Hope this helps, feel free to reach out if you want to pick my brain about this ^^

Jessica Sinclair

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