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Thirst Trap (Cover)

Art by RiayH / Story by Kennycomix

This series will be different from the standard comic pages I usually do. I wanted to try something new so this is a series of one page panels or pinups, accompanied with some text in the form of a social media post. It will be a slight build up until we get to the action but I hope you enjoy the ride. Also shoutout to RiayH for the incredible art.

Thirst Trap (Cover) Thirst Trap (Cover)

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i find the premise interesting also damn

Raziel-faustus

New character 😉

Kennycomix

Lindsey Patterson?

Dwohntany

This looks hot but I really don’t like the way that the Patterson’s and Simmons have just been sidelined. It feels like the same thing that is happening to the Coopers and the Lodges in Riverdale is happening to the MCs of the Belleville Universe. The Patterson’s and Lodges are the MCs of the Belleville Universe and the legendary OG OCs. They should get way more attention. I don’t like the way this is turning into a universe where countless new characters are introduced rather than the focus being a select few who act as the main characters and most impressive characters sexually and physically. There have been so many new characters introduced in Belleville and they all seem to just massively outclass the Patterson’s and Simmonds massively, both sexually and physically and it really sucks to see that. The Patterson’s were created to have the most legendary and gigantic tits in the Belleville Universe, like the Coopers in the Riverdale Universe. The Simmons were created to have the most legendary and enormous asses in the Belleville universe, like the Lodges in the Riverdale Universe, with Pam Patterson and Shondra Simmons representing the ultimate examples of this. Pam with the most legendary and humongous tits in the Belleville Universe and Shondra with the most iconic and massive ass. They compliment each other perfectly that way and the design of having those two families as neighbours was perfect, since it put the most massive tits in the Belleville Universe in one house, the Patterson’s, the it put the most massive asses in the Belleville Universe in the other house, the Simmons. That design was awesome and it made Pam and Shondra and their daughter so iconic since Molly and Lindsay have the most massive tits out of the teens in the Belleville Universe, being Pam’s daughters, and Aleysha has the most massive ass out of the teens in the Belleville Universe, due to being Shondra daughter. The Patterson’s and Simmonds girls are supposed to be the MCs and the OG legendary core characters of the Belleville Universe, they are the supreme sluts, the ultimate whores who are the very best at fucking. The Patterson’s girls are the ultimate BBC sluts who are the very best at fucking the most massive black cocks ever, taking them balls deep and draining them. The Patterson girls are the most BBC addicted girls around in the Belleville Universe. And yet we barely see them. We get countless small side stories and shorts which just seem to add an endless number of new characters who are all drawn and portrayed as being vastly physically and sexually superior to the Patterson and Simmonds girls. This girls in this comic makes Shondra look like she has a small ass. The busty milfs you have introduced make Pam look deeply unimpressive and like she has small tits in comparison. It utterly ruins anything and everything that made the Patterson’s and Simmonds special. It would be really great if you could emphasise just how astonishing and exceptional the Patterson’s tits and the Simmonds asses are in the wider universe. Make mention of Pam and her legendary gigantic tits and Shondra and her massive ass in some of these shorts. Have some black stud make some off hand comment about how “Mrs Patterson’s tits are the biggest tits I’ve ever seen” or “Those Patterson whores have the most massive tits around” and the same sort of references to Shondra and Aleysha, maybe a black stud saying to a fat assed teen slut “damn you ass nearly as big as Aleysha Simmonds” or something like that, which both makes the girl in question sound impressive but also emphasises the supreme position of Aleysha as having the fattest teen ass or Pam Patterson as having the most massive tits in the universe. It would be great to see the main characters referenced in ways that emphasised their supreme position rather than just having new characters drawn and portrayed in ways that make the Patterson’s and Simmons girls look unimpressive and physically and sexually outclassed.

QWEASDZXC

This looks like this is going to be interesting can't wait to see the full story

G mugen64

HELL YEAH another Riay H collab! I love their art and your storytelling. Can't wait to see what pages y'all cook 🙏🏾🔥

EchoTheWorld

Goddam she got a fat ass, i would love to bury my fave in that ass

Lunatic


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