ADDENDUM:
Dai, I do NOT hold you directly responsible for ANY of the writing complaints on this. You did a great job. My issue is with Hawk.
Hot voice, quality model, and some good concepts, but… I feel like Ryoko didn’t get the justice she deserved.
It’s a shame. I was really looking forward to this.
EDIT: To lay out what was missing:
- A little more lore. I get that, from our conversation about this, you didn’t watch this before, and that’s fine. I still think a little bit of research would’ve given you some really good material. The power orbs on Tenchi-ken (the sword), for example, could’ve been a bargaining chip of sorts. Or maybe she’d get royally insulted, call on her ship Ryo-Ohki and have the place glassed or something.
- A little more interaction would’ve been nice.
- Getting to see one of the other sides of Ryoko. Sometimes she’d be innocent and lovable. Sometimes she’d be a borderline catgirl and lazy as hell. Sometimes she’d be straight-up horny and want to skip “playing with her food.” Sometimes… she’d get murderous… actually, you covered that last one fairly well. My bad.
TechPriest
2025-03-18 18:11:10 +0000 UTC
Okay that was hot especially how she took the spank
Damascus Damocles
2025-03-18 11:29:36 +0000 UTC
Well, not since the 90's per se. She became a MILF just a few years ago. 👍