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KWC Ryoko (Ad Free)

KWC Ryoko (Ad Free)

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ADDENDUM: Dai, I do NOT hold you directly responsible for ANY of the writing complaints on this. You did a great job. My issue is with Hawk. Hot voice, quality model, and some good concepts, but… I feel like Ryoko didn’t get the justice she deserved. It’s a shame. I was really looking forward to this. EDIT: To lay out what was missing: - A little more lore. I get that, from our conversation about this, you didn’t watch this before, and that’s fine. I still think a little bit of research would’ve given you some really good material. The power orbs on Tenchi-ken (the sword), for example, could’ve been a bargaining chip of sorts. Or maybe she’d get royally insulted, call on her ship Ryo-Ohki and have the place glassed or something. - A little more interaction would’ve been nice. - Getting to see one of the other sides of Ryoko. Sometimes she’d be innocent and lovable. Sometimes she’d be a borderline catgirl and lazy as hell. Sometimes she’d be straight-up horny and want to skip “playing with her food.” Sometimes… she’d get murderous… actually, you covered that last one fairly well. My bad.

TechPriest

Okay that was hot especially how she took the spank

Damascus Damocles

Well, not since the 90's per se. She became a MILF just a few years ago. 👍

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