Heather book 5 chapter 5 ending poll.
Added 2020-12-17 04:48:26 +0000 UTCThis poll will run for a few weeks to allow the chapter to reach all the patreon levels.
The question is do you like the ending where Heather and Frank decide to go back to the Gwens city to see her bookstore, the the ending where they have a serious conversation about their relationship?
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Well I’m only about 4 months late to the party XD But I like the bookstore ending
2021-04-24 01:53:12 +0000 UTCThank you for saying so. I was VERY nervous about taking this step. And I wasn't sure how it would be received. The big test will be in the next 12 hours when I release this chapter to RoyalRoad and the larger audience gets to react to it. I pray it is received well.
2021-01-26 04:30:43 +0000 UTCHi. I Think the relationship should happen, but not with the relationship ending. Add some more teasing from Q and let him come to the decision the change the appearance for him self. Let it slowly flow into place. Probably like half way in part 5. Sorry if this is a bit opinionated but i think it is better to weave it in the story a bit more naturally. Anyway great work im really enjoying the story. :) Edit: after reading a bit further i must say something... I was wrong. Combined ending was great and the follow chapter flowed nicely. Sorry. ;P
2021-01-26 03:00:17 +0000 UTCJust a note, I have written all the chapters that follow so I could easily remove the relationship. So if you haven't voted please do. If it tips in favor of the NO relationship bookstore ending I will go to royalroad with that one, and scrub the relationship. So do not think this poll is over. There is still time to change the course.
2021-01-20 01:38:28 +0000 UTCI think it's official, Frank and Heather are going to have a relationship. I will rework the ending to blend them both and repost it later.
2020-12-17 18:24:15 +0000 UTCya, Heather had to initiate that conversation or Frank would never of said anything.
Daniel Drake
2020-12-17 13:42:21 +0000 UTCThis is very true, I could easily combine both.
2020-12-17 12:44:59 +0000 UTCNo reason you can't slot the city visit in after the confession
matticide FOWD
2020-12-17 08:00:10 +0000 UTCI like both and think a combination of some sort sounds nice
Michael McLeod
2020-12-17 06:15:49 +0000 UTC
