HTK Breanne origin story in the works
Added 2020-07-18 06:24:36 +0000 UTCChapter one of Breanne's story is in the works. I keep going back over it trying to decide if its boring. I spend a lot of time just describing how she feels in this new world, and rehashing some of the history of New Eden.
I feel like I have to do this for logics sake but it results in a chapter where not much happens. I will post it in 12-15 hours and my readers here can tell me what they think. It will be available to $3 patrons and higher,and ONLY to patrons, This isn't going to royal road. So this is a unique special reward.
Do me a favor though, be honest and tell me what you think. If it's boring I will write another one. I suppose chapter one of a book can't always be packed with action as your establishing characters and the world.
