chapter notes
Added 2019-06-28 13:51:19 +0000 UTCSome very important things are said in this chapter. I would like to know if you feel it's missing anything. Astikar is being very cryptic for reasons not yet explained. There is so much more going on here that is yet to be revealed. So I worry some readers might come away feeling they didn't get what they wanted here. The wider mystery is hinted at when Astikar tells him he does not know the true face of his enemy.
Also do you think it would increase the tension to put a Tavis Ayawa chapter between this one and the chapter where he enters the light? Sort of drag out the cliffhanger?
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I felt this way too. I think people want to see this unfold and don't need another annoying Gedris mistake in between.
2019-06-28 18:05:57 +0000 UTCCliffhangers are good but not at this time. I would feel more frustrated and annoyed if i had to wait a chapter. After this one its a perfect time to do it.
Sam4005
2019-06-28 17:52:33 +0000 UTC
