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DRAGONBALL NTR 10 - Scrubdown [Goku X Videl][Doujinshi][Ongoing]

Oh-hohoho... I am SO looking forward to writing this one. I've been holding onto this idea for a LONG time, ever since I finished the first Goku and Videl.

Consider this a kind of revamped version of the first NTR I ever wrote, featuring this surprisingly workable pairing and one of my personal favourite NTR scenarios to think about.

This upcoming doujinshi will be covering the commission request by Paul - who requested a Goku X Videl pairing. Whereas the Part 2 of NTR 9 A Daughter's First Time will feature Gohan, Bulma and Bra, as requested by Bob sageit.

The reason why I'm making these two specific commission requests into doujinshi, is because I've been fantasizing about making these into full blown comics in the future for quite a few months now, and considering the mop up of projects I've done, I am quite keen to get these started, as I am in the mood for these.

For clarification on commissions I have to complete and have already completed, follow the link. Sadly I won't be opening for any commissions until THESE ones are completed: https://www.patreon.com/posts/54868582

Also, for those searching for it, here's the link to the first Dragonball NTR Comic - The Future In Law - https://www.patreon.com/posts/40801833

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Comments

Dang. It sucks Gohan got nerfed but I understand. I can't wait to read the rest

Hmm... maybe.

OK, I'm just guessing here but is this comic gonna end, revealing it was all video's masterbatory fantasy?

Dark Inferno

InCha datte Gal?

😏 aaaah that manga site, now I Gotcha

GamerLegend09

Its search numbers you type on a certain manga site of an adult nature

TimEatsCake

That’s what makes you a talented Writer Write, swallowing past what frustrates and anger you down to your very core, Channeling that inner demon and manipulating it to further amplify your creativity is what makes you unique

GamerLegend09

Is it an inside joke? or was that supposed to be link?

GamerLegend09

😐 Huh?

GamerLegend09

I just had to post this here, reminds me of your work lol! 397338

TimEatsCake

Though it pains me to nerf him and tears at every fibre of my soul, my inner demon is shouting at me to 'DO IT!'

I agree completely.

My intentions exactly.

I appreciate the aforementioned warning for your fellow Gohan Golden age loving Public. This pretty much Shouts how the DB series is treating Gohan.

GamerLegend09

Very accurate to what they did to gohan in super...

ZaaZoJo

Yes I did

you nerfed Gohan HARD!!! LOL XD

caleb smith

Yeah, I'm not a big fan of Gohan these days, mainly because of how he was handled in the Buu saga. I do agree that he could've been done better.

Immortal Dragon

Not worried. Cell saga gohan and golden age gohan are the goat.

Qrow Nightshade

True. Though in this case I'm highlighting more of the sham aspects of canon Gohan vs what a GOAT he could've been- in a very shallow and non-obvious way, admittedly.

Yeah, surprising to see Gohan having "performance issues" but I guess that's Videl's excuse to go hop on his dad's rod lol but it's not like characters in NTR need an excuse to betray their partner anyway, they usually do it just because they can 😂

Immortal Dragon

ok goku just popping up behind videl is fucking hilarious... lmao

ZaaZoJo

One thing you guys need to know ahead of time, for all those Gohan fans on my subscription list, Gohan is sadly going to be madly disrespected in this doujinshi (Canon Gohan, not Golden Age Gohan, because Golden Age Gohan is GOAT). This doujinshi basically reflects how terrible constant studying is, for several reasons...

I will thank u

Jesus

I'll try. But keep an eye out for other updates as well.

Can you send me the link once its complete if possible I've begun a collection of all the completed comics u made on my phone

Jesus

It'll take a little while.

When will it be completed if I may ask

Jesus


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