S2 EP51: Reunion
Added 2019-03-07 08:03:56 +0000 UTC
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Well, I hope you enjoyed that ride because there are still 8 more pages left!
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Seeing as you guys are my testers, in a way, I'd like to know any feedback on this part of the comic, at least - was it easy to follow the dialogue, did the actions make sense, etc. OR any mistakes you can find (because I'm prone to those, as you all know.)
Cheers, and see ya on Friday!
Comments
Oh, huh! I didn't realize she had it in her left! Thank you for letting me know! :)
Chekhov
2019-03-08 00:30:55 +0000 UTCThis is amazing! Very believable action wise, Rose is very impulsive and passionate so lines up with her character well. Dialogue is great! I suppose the panels where there is kind of "cross talk" like the Steven profile one you may have readers that get confused by who is saying what but you have done everything you can to mitigate that. Honestly the only "issue" and I use that term super loosely because it in no way actually hinders the narrative or anything and is super nit-picky, but canonically Rose is shown with her main weapon, the shield, in her right hand and the sword in her left hand. You only show her sword in her hand in two scenes though and it's a very minor detail. Amazing job as always!
2019-03-08 00:27:46 +0000 UTCOmggg that panel where Steven is in profile and hiS HEAD IS A DIAMOND <a href="https://media1.tenor.com/images/5903bf3dff09e05ad1aa4c82c8fb08c6/tenor.gif?itemid=7229683" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://media1.tenor.com/images/5903bf3dff09e05ad1aa4c82c8fb08c6/tenor.gif?itemid=7229683</a>
Lizzy B
2019-03-07 20:54:25 +0000 UTCBecame a patron just to see the finale, and I was NOT disappointed!! :D The fact that Rose is right about WD controlling Pearl makes it so hard to refute her claims about Steven being White herself. And of course, he concealed his knowledge of the Diamonds, too... But only because he wanted to protect Pearl! Unfortunately, there are just enough lies between them that it draws everything he's said into question. Thank you so much for all your hard work! It's a beautiful finale, and I can find no fault in it!
Skull
2019-03-07 17:37:39 +0000 UTCI love how the panels get chaotic after the reveal. It took me a second to realize steven's attack poofed the gems, though. Wow
GiovanH
2019-03-07 16:16:19 +0000 UTCAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH
Callisto LaCorte
2019-03-07 16:10:45 +0000 UTCoh my god Chekhov is on x-games mode this is so intense, can't wait for the rest
2019-03-07 15:17:52 +0000 UTCOh my god. That was so intense! It really puts everything into perspective when you realize why Pearl just repeats whatever Steven says because it’s basically like in the show when White Diamond speaks through Pearl, only since Steven is half human he doesn’t speak through her, Pearl can only mimic what he says to an extent. Man, this got my heart going. I’m so excited for the next pages!
Jon Dalbon
2019-03-07 14:47:48 +0000 UTCI can’t wait to see see the rest. I didn’t expect Rose to put things together so quickly so that’s a pleasant (or unpleasant depending how you see it) surprise. And the cold looks she’s giving Steven are really unsettling. I think you showed everything you needed to just right. The frames of Steven using his diamond power and poofing the other gems was particularly impressive.
Kruh-Daze
2019-03-07 14:43:05 +0000 UTCIt is just what I expected to happen, even if I thought of several possible scenarios this path is the most successful. I love everything that is happening, everything is clear and although it leaves a part for you to imagine what is happening that makes it even better.
2019-03-07 14:19:33 +0000 UTCOh no no no... I was really hoping she wouldn't figure it out. And she still doesn't understand that he's half human either. My poor poor unicorn baby... Well, at least he has his pearl back. So he's not totally alone through this. I look forward to seeing how this chapter ends
2019-03-07 12:45:02 +0000 UTCThings are really popping off and I LOVE IT
PapaMedaMacha
2019-03-07 12:39:11 +0000 UTCholy shit fuck me up Chekhov
Lady of Monsters
2019-03-07 10:49:20 +0000 UTCI love it!~ the effect for Steven’s power was Phenomenal!~ and the way White Pearl was smiling and Echoing to Steven just tore at the heart strings~ and Rose was just so perfect in how she payed down the facts and connected the dots for the Crystal Gems~ Poor Steven~ that Existential Crisis must be so traumatic~ “Even if you pretend like you’re not the one moving her around, It’s Obvious!” Such a powerful jab~ the only thing that would make this whole scene better would be some color and a nice moon lit lighting~
Rökkr Ragnarok
2019-03-07 09:29:45 +0000 UTCWhy did you think she would have shattered White? She's got her sword, which physically CAN'T shatter gems... And he dialogue didn't indicate anything regarding shattering...?
Chekhov
2019-03-07 09:12:22 +0000 UTCGreat job. I love this. Just thinking though, I’m sure pink doesn’t want to hurt the diamonds. She loves them. Since they are basically their moms. But Hates what they do. So I don’t find it realistic for her to try to shatter unless then under extreme circumstances. if that’s the direction to be taken.
2019-03-07 09:10:37 +0000 UTCIt's so good !
Marie-Jeanne MUSSARD
2019-03-07 09:00:42 +0000 UTC
