Worth the Candle, ch 101-104
Added 2018-06-07 23:45:42 +0000 UTCChapters! See links below, let me know if there are any problems. Chapter will go to wide release on AO3 tomorrow.
Comments
I tried Grammarly for about two weeks, but stopped using it because the false positive rate was way too high, which I found really frustrating. I probably should use it for final editing passes and just suffer through reading its woefully incorrect suggestions, but I kind of hate not being able to trust that it's correct about a rule. It also kind of contradicts naturalistic use of language, which I'm fairly big on. I'll try it for next time, and would do it for this batch if I had any dedicated editing time before it went live.
Alexander Wales
2018-06-08 14:26:16 +0000 UTCFantastic chapters as always! They kept me alive on a long flight back from michigan. Have you considered using Grammarly to give your chapters a once-over? Highly recommended. Here are the typos it throws out at me: 101: Scattered Asches, -> Scattered Ashes (?) with little door -> with a little door three primary problem -> three primary problems was edging into morning, -> was edging into the morning, trying to add in some levity -> trying to add some levity pocket in her dress, and -> pocket in her dress and sideways glance, but focused -> sideways glance but focused of them, if it was -> of them if it was And I stopped there, having skipped several incorrect alerts as well. I think it would help app.grammarly.com
Ryan
2018-06-08 08:27:02 +0000 UTCWow. These chapters were extremely satisfying. This story has become better than 99% of published fantasy novels. It is at the very least my favorite.
Phnglui mglw'nafh R'lyeh
2018-06-08 04:06:25 +0000 UTC
