EXILE OF THE CROWN PT.11 (ILLUSTRATED)
Added 2025-07-23 21:34:08 +0000 UTCWelcome home.
CHAPTER 17. AETHERFALL
CHAPTER 18. NO MORE
CHAPTER 19. ODD THIRST
CHAPTER 20. ALMOST CAUGHT
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Thank you ☺️ 🥺
AFS
2025-08-08 09:45:22 +0000 UTCI disagree. Your stories are great especially Blackmailers Web. Keep up the good work.
Rozzhadan
2025-08-07 13:12:10 +0000 UTCI think you misinterpreted some aspects. It is a mother & son story, it’s going secretly to others. The father & daughter are seen only by Caylan and Adelaide. No one knows about it. What happened doesn’t make it also a f & d story. It’s just a part of this world where inc is getting out of hand because of the crystals and Darst. Then inc happened between some people but no one liked it (besides our two main characters) Adelaide is reluctant, but she is loving it. The circumstances are different, she’s back at home, so for her it’s harder and much more complicated now. That’s why she calls it 🍇 at first, though she was the first one to get into his room and do stuff. If it was a real 🍇, she’d tell Alistair right away about what happened. No one knows about their relationship besides the two of them. I don’t count Kanavasi and Alarmin, she just guessed it because she knew about the crystal thing. That’s it. They’ll get executed if people find out. That’s the whole point) it’s okay if you disagree with some things, but that how the story was always supposed to go)
AFS
2025-07-25 21:24:14 +0000 UTCYou fucked this story by putting father & daughter seen. this should be only mom & son story going secretly to their relatives & others. Raping seen also not fit into this. There should be mom reluctance but secretly loving it
Adda
2025-07-25 17:05:06 +0000 UTC
