EXILE OF THE CROWN PT.10 (ILLUSTRATED)
Added 2025-05-29 22:29:37 +0000 UTCCHAPTER 14. ETERNAL REMINDER OF A NIGHT DESTINED TO BE FORGOTTEN
CHAPTER 15. THE CRYSTAL
CHAPTER 16. THE FINAL NIGHT ON THE ISLAND
This is the last part on the Matrokai island
Comments
Thank you!!! I'm starting to notice that a lot of people don't like scenes with mother and father. I always assumed that this is a fine part of the storytelling. Let me formulate this right. Like, for a son, it's a normal part to want to take mother from father. It's like a little part of all these stories. And of course, mothers and fathers sometimes make love (like Nymira had with Inglud or Beatrice with that other king who is MCβs father in Duty), and so for me it was never considered a cheating thing or a turn-off. It's not like she's making love with a random person. She had sex with father before, but MCβs goal is to stop it basically. Here it's just a memory, basically, of his conception. It can be weird, but it shows that Alistair (Caylan's father) is not a great lover, he is old and he is kind of a coward whoβs scared of his possible son. Adelaide deserves someone better. He is good in bed only because of Caylan. And Caylan realizes that he wants to give his mother a baby for real. I can understand why it might be a turn-off. Iβm just trying to explain my perspective on it. Thank you again for reading and for your kind words!!!
AFS
2025-07-03 10:30:20 +0000 UTCFirst, congratulations, I enjoyed this collection very much, but I must that the father mating with the mother sequence was a turn off for me and felt unnecessary, at least to me... for the rest, again props to you, good work.
Magns32
2025-07-03 01:33:48 +0000 UTC
