TRIBAL HUNT PT.07 (ILLUSTRATED)
Added 2024-07-17 07:16:21 +0000 UTCCHAPTER 11. FALL
CHAPTER 12. LABOR
Comments
Thanks for the feedback! I like TH too. Interestingly, the story concept started as a simple tale about a son from a tribe winning his mother in a hunt, but the characters and their relationships turned out to be too layered, so the events just kept evolving. I don't like it when, by the end, the mother just becomes the protagonist's girlfriend. That's why my characters, my mothers, always have some sort of resistance to these inappropriate relationships throughout the whole story.
AFS
2024-07-19 08:46:36 +0000 UTCFor me, your best story at the moment. I really like the whole tribe thing. I ike that Gnelsey seems to not like the relationship with her son but then we see hints that she actually likes it, when she was in labor for an example, or when she became jealous etc. Of course now is the time for other stories but I hope we see "Tribal Hunt" in the near future^^
Kalli
2024-07-17 17:54:17 +0000 UTCWhat a twist pls don't ruin Anarungu's happiness bro Pls make the mother and son a happy lustful couple
Devraj
2024-07-17 07:37:51 +0000 UTC
