XaiJu
Daniel Kensington Author
Daniel Kensington Author

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A bit more work on the cover ...

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She's cute, not quite as cute as the redhead on the first books cover. But better than the girl on the second cover. (I do not try to place who is who, I just appreciate the pretty girls LOL.) As for the art I like it, and it's better to represent a scene from the coming book, instead of trying to pander to people who want to see this character dressed in a certain way, or set up the background to try and tell us who she is. I'd like to assume that this is one of the MC's girl's, and this is him and her getting hooked up / shacked up / married. So the scene would be appropriate. The only thing that would make me happy is if there was a chain connected to that big rock, then a ball at the end of the chain. A play on the old "ball n chain joke about marriage."

Perversity

Yes! Ibsee what you bridal with the shoulders. Ibthink you can leave it as is. I do see some people still asking for some muscle def. Not alot you can do with this pose.....maybe a small shadowed "line" on the leg?..

Johnetta


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