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Warlock 2 - Preview Chapters - 1-36

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Such a cruel cliffhanger!

Wconn1979

I think it should still show up with Hindsight were that the case. Maybe not the entire thing but some outer edges of it. Plus whatever mana system was making it move. My guess is an attempt by a Family to make a Warlock that failed, leaving essentially an endless hunger for mana in the mundane that was kidnapped for the experiment. If an artificial resonance failed and was just sucking mana into a pit it might explain why you aren't able to see it with Hindsight.

Thraymn

I am immensely cranky at the end, I have to wait for more now }=(

Joe Monopoli

Looking at the schedules, are they door to door? Can they teleport between classes? Because there is no time between classes for walking.

Joe Monopoli

The girls would be in the way, and he would have to fight to protect himself as well as them, which would be distracting, getting him killed. He is using his team, Brittney to gather help, Sam to lead the help to him, Hanna to trace, and Rachel to provide Heartfire. He is from a rough area. He has undoubtedly been in fights. When he fought sweats, he knew enough to bring a knee up. The witches have been taught to use magic even in spell stick; Rachel is just a small woman if you discount her magic.

John Temple

My theory is that the thing is an automation with a manna-collecting device. That is why magic doesn't affect it; a vampire is running it.

John Temple

OK, was just a bit upset that Rachel was left behind at the end - if magic doesn't work, then this is going to have to get physical, and a spellstick player is exactly who I would want beside me in an old fashion fight. Seems like Noah's fatal flaw is not seeing "his" witches as equals to stand beside him, but weaker people that need to be protected - be great to see Rachel (or Sam) step in to save him and it is only the two (three) of them working together that let's them win - and Noah has to reconsider what teamwork and taking care of each other really means. Would love to see Sam play an equal in daily life and fights to make clear one can be submissive in bed, but still an equal in the world.

Eric Vandet

I don't think so, because witches with only one resonance do still have 3, it's just that 2 of them are inert. I don't think mortals have any resonances at all, so there would be nothing to awaken.

Thraymn

Yarg! I think we better see the following chapters soon. Whoa! These chapters are great!

John Temple

Yes, the final "preview" will be the full book before it's published. That'll be in either pdf or epub.

Daniel Kensington

Will these previews eventually be the whole book? I've been really enjoying reading it in chunks like this.

Zaeron

I swear you and Michale Scott have this weird thing with blue balling people, that end of chapter 36? Just killed me with the stop at the preview

Dre

Ugh the wait between previews is only going to get worse now isn't it? The pace is going to pick up and I am going to hate not being able to binge through the end of the book :-( Excellent new chapters, IMHO you're maintaining the same high bar you set with book one.

Todd King

Probably 60-70% in the preview. It's hard to say, because I'm popping things back and forth between the end of this and the beginning of #3, trying to find the right break point.

Daniel Kensington

What percentage of the book was that preview? I want to wait for the whole thing, it that obviously isn’t happening.

Jim Smith

Cliffhanger. Not cool my guy 😵‍💫

Juan Magallon

One thing I've been wondering, with the way Noah can give his affinities to girls with 1 aspect, if he could do the same to a mortal girl with no magic? Either way, would be a nice twist.

AZ

Hopefully another super productive week; I can’t wait 7 whole days to see what happens next!

Troy

You bastard 🤣 I know you have the next chapter finished give it to me it ot like I can subscribe twice

Jake Statz

That's an absolutely mean place to stop this preview

Captain Nuclear

The last preview ended with Chapter 30a, just to save others from having to do the search I just did :)

Mike G.


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