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Added 2024-12-01 13:44:20 +0000 UTCUp to Chapter 12. :)
Regular caveats apply - subject to further revision, but the basic story and content will remain the same.
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> "And it bring harm to no other," I think you want "an" (archaic for "if") here, rather than "and".
alethiophile
2024-12-03 07:14:47 +0000 UTCThank you! *Spoiler* Questioning where Sam's resonant isn't really romantic love but familial love which is why hers is empty. Or possibly damage to her resonant due to harsh treatment from her mom. Excited to see what's next and hopefully see what craziness shows up. Maybe the Crone's warning is due to Noah about to get marked, we'll see!
darthcrouch
2024-12-01 22:27:37 +0000 UTCDeep nature of love discussion towards the end was well done and part of what helps separate your writing from the generic men’s romance novels that just have filler between spicy scenes. I will admit I’m super anxious for Cassandra to make an entrance and it’s torturing me that it hasn’t happened yet despite 12 chapters in, a return to school, and a cafeteria scene.
Todd King
2024-12-01 20:59:43 +0000 UTCI did not expect a reference to tulip mania from the Goddess, lol that was fun
foldedcorners
2024-12-01 20:10:27 +0000 UTCNice chapters. Answered some of the questions about witches vs warlock balancing their resonants and introduced the housing for covens while at school even if they are not using it yet. So this now makes Noah the head of the coven and no longer a ward of Mel. I’m betting the next recruitment meeting is going to be a bit different than the first one.
Jason Becker
2024-12-01 14:44:18 +0000 UTCGood stuff :D
Captain Nuclear
2024-12-01 14:21:57 +0000 UTC
