WOADE chapters 61-65

It was a cool concept but I must agree it wasn't a good situation for it. I do kinda hope the revenants of Asteria make a return eventually though.

Some BS Deity

62 feels much better now. It gave future agency back to both characters and opened up much more options for the future plot now that they aren't locked into a servant/master situation. It is likely she'll have to deal with noble BS still but it isn't a guarantee anymore and him being near dead instead of undead removes the shackles of his burdens from the MC, leaving her options open.

Alex I

I liked it.

Falxie

I mean, I can understand that! I'll do another chapter and post it and see what you think I was kinda torn my self

I think my main problem is that we now have this disgraced noble character tied to our MC, I would have much preferred him remaining independent and just being an external ally. Also very confused on why our MC just let him die like it wasn't a problem, pretty sure resurrecting adventurers is a good way to paint a target on your back. Would have been better as a near death experience instead of a resurrection/servant situation. Because now our MC is tied up in not just this dudes noble baggage but the baggage of being a domain of undead that also makes anyone dying in it into undead. If a holy crusade wasn't already a guarantee it is now.

Alex I

Aye! this was actually the last chapter about him xD, I just wanted to wrap up the arc and move on back to Calixa

Not sure I like the turn being taken in 62. Combined with a general lack of insight into our MC's perspective for several chapters and the fact that I do not enjoy overly political stories I don't know if I will continue reading if this story starts getting bogged down by the stereotypical noble politics plotline. I started the story with our MC and now it is looking like she isn't going to be the main MC or even have her own driving force in the plot if disgraced noble cliche number 4 is now somehow a domain servant and driven to vengeance against people our MC shouldn't really care about.

Alex I