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Chapter 85

[Here it is, everybody.  I'm sorry it took so l

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Thanks a bunch! I worked really hard to make it a good one. It took a month for a reason lol. And I agree about Sofie, screw da haters

IrateRapScallion

Wow. That was the most intense fight scene I’ve ever read. If this was a show that would be a series defining fight. Great job. Also Sofie is just fine the way she is. Her character really works, especially when bounced off of Blake’s

Leaf

thanks!

IrateRapScallion

Was pretty much worth it. Gah, Sofie is such a preachy bitch. Out of all the Outworlder invaders, she was the most lucky and unscathed. It's easier for her to say all those thing because she isn't paralyzed by the waist down, waking in pain and covered in shit and some girl pushing her agenda by harping to guy to do and fufill everyday. I guess, I would like her character more, if Blake didn't get baited to her bullshit all the time and always somehow not getting the last word. I know he turns his speaker off during the start of the chapter but I'd like to see more of that in the future, pretending he acknowledges her points and tuning her out. All in all, one of the best chapters, only second to the chapter where the Chos realized that not all problems are solved by strenght but by also cunning, slight of hands as well IMO.

Chad B. Sonnen


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