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Revised Chapter 46 coming tomorrow, please read it

Hey peeps!  So as I wrote Chapter 47 (which ended up being 12,500 words and might be broken up into two chapters it's so big) I ended up realizing that I messed up Chapter 46.  I'd written the much of the characterization of Tehlmar wrong and it didn't match the character he is in 47.  So not only did I write what is currently my longest chapter yet (until I split it maybe) I also rewrote a great deal of 46.  Whew!  I'll be posting the new version of 46 during my lunch break tomorrow.  Please read it even if you already read the last version--it's different enough that part of 47 won't make sense otherwise.  Chapter 47 has been sent to my editor friend, we'll see how much revision that takes but it will hopefully be posted in the next few days.


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