Cataclysm Conquest | Chapter 15: Atomic Physician (First Draft)
Added 2026-02-06 01:02:27 +0000 UTC
Comments
Great to see his character repurposed, I thought he would be a great antagonist with the book 1 chapters though I understand why he was removed and fits so much better in book 3 when Leonidas is more established.
BW13307
2026-02-08 15:51:54 +0000 UTCTftc
Dominick Ruiz
2026-02-06 04:26:31 +0000 UTCIt was supposed to be a tongue-in-cheek Khan-being-Khan moment, but I can remove it easily. Thanks for being honest!
Hannibal Forge
2026-02-06 03:54:08 +0000 UTCOk, some criticism here and you can obviously take it or leave it; the line about “actual illegal aliens” feels ham-fisted and completely ruins immersion into the story. 🤷♂️
J Snyder
2026-02-06 03:18:10 +0000 UTCSame!
Hannibal Forge
2026-02-06 02:31:53 +0000 UTCTbf up to the point he starts burning them alive he has some *semblance* of sense but that gets absolutely (ironically enough) decimated by both action and behaviour.
Mister Majick Man
2026-02-06 02:24:24 +0000 UTCTftc, ahhh good ol kahn.
Mr Exar Kun
2026-02-06 01:54:12 +0000 UTCFor his voice, I hear Miguel Ferrer from the 1998 Mulan (he voiced Shan Yu, the Mongolian leader)
Kory Smith
2026-02-06 01:31:15 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Bryn
2026-02-06 01:29:20 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Quentin Cozzi
2026-02-06 01:15:33 +0000 UTCOkay, so this dude is literally insane. Another person who thinks they are gods gift to mankind. Thanks for the chapter.
Alex Mangum
2026-02-06 01:13:49 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Ramb0Jo3
2026-02-06 01:04:04 +0000 UTC
