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EARLY ACCESS (maybe) |I| PULLED OVER and SNIFF INSPECTED by CATGIRL POLICE

EARLY ACCESS (maybe) |I| PULLED OVER and SNIFF INSPECTED by CATGIRL POLICE

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srry to be a little late on the feedback but I had one or two notes myself. if its okay. What stood out to me was the quick changes between each side of the 3Dio. the effect of alternating between sides per word spoken in the same sentence kinda messed with the immersion bc i imagined you quickly switching sides of my head between words. It seems like an effect only appliable to a very specific set of circumstances. Maybe for a mysterious character trying to generate confusion or an established flirtatious character trying to fluster the listener. Which the character here struck me more as professionally aggressive than flirty so it kinda bumped. More to the point I know roleplay authenticity is important to you soooo I wanted to point out that a default distance of engagement would make the use of the 3Dio much more immersive. In an IRL interaction both of our ears are listening to the speakers voice at about the same volume (if you're facing them ofc). so you can close the distance and get in our personal space when you want to dial up the intensity at a major plot point. - I mean this for just the dialogue, the ear sniffing was on point and integral to the plot I assure you. I have no further notes because everything else really felt like you, you're doing great! I really hope I didnt over do it with the criticism

Rikki_125

Yes, this does help thank you!! I really wanted feedback and I’ll definitely keep it in mind. When I tag it I’ll put aggressive but going forward I’ll do some softer stuff. Thank you so much

Dubious Creature

That really was decidedly British, Skips, Tesco Clubcard, pound coins... This is a decent effort with the 3Dio, the sniffing was rather intense. I had no issues with it, but I feel some might find it abrasive. The jingling and tapping triggers felt a little fast for my taste, maybe slow it down a little. The whispering was a little up and down, I found it was, on occasion, a little loud. I hope that was constructive criticism for you, it does come from a place of love because I really do think you are a wonderful performer and I am really proud to be one of your fans. Even with my critique I still think it was a wonderful audio and I really want to thank you so much for the wonderful content you provide. Thank you so much Miss Creature. Cwtches and headpats.

Jaime Rodriguez


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