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March 2023 Short Story Poll

So this month we've got one Aetheriad short story (Replacements, set on the world of The Wrack- which some people have been eagerly awaiting for a few months now) and two non-Aetheriad works. Both of the latter were the kind of short stories inspired directly by another author's book I was reading at the time- Howl's Moving Castle, by Dianna Wynne Jones, for First and Last; and Kraken, by China Mieville, for Theomachies Plural.

Theomachies Plural, fair warning, contains a HIGH degree of cussing. It's normally not my style- I don't have a problem with cussing in real life or in writing, I just don't do it much, save when it's warranted- but I genuinely couldn't make the protagonist's voice work without having her cuss three out of five sentences or so. (And, since the story is set in an alternate England, it uses the c-word once or twice- it has very different connotations in England (and Australia) than it does in America, where it's considered much more obscene.)

One of the biggest reasons I do this Patreon is to push myself as a writer, try new voices, techniques, and styles. (Second only to just plain loving short stories.) This one was definitely a workout with my voice skills, and I'm pretty proud of it.

(I'm proud of my short stories in general, I just wanted to explain why I felt the need to use so much obscenity in the story, since I know it bothers some people. I don't intend to make a habit of it, but... this story needed it, imho.)


Comments

A tough choice indeed but perhaps replacements will at last see the light of day!

Apotheosis

I'm torn between Replacements and Theomachies Plural!

Ben


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