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Various Happenings - Stripesocks (Part 2) [p.11]

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Sorry for the lateness.  Been a bit of a week to faff about to try and recover my stamina so my work was a bit slower than usual.  Still, it came out in the end.

Not sold on the onomatopoeia just yet.  I feel very hokey using it, but at the same time I feel like the actions need something.  So I give it a shot.  Maybe I'll figure it out proper, or ditch it all together.

These things tend to evolve on their own, after all. 

Various Happenings - Stripesocks (Part 2) [p.11]

Comments

I think the onomatopoeia works nicely. It helps (me at least) get an impression of just how Eddie's body is working atm, with the various noises and things. I never would've guessed she's basically a goo monster atm. :)

Alex


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