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Applejack WIP2

I think the anatomy is better this time : /

Applejack WIP2

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I think this looks better but I want her body to stay flat on a horizontal line. Will adjust a bit on her bottom

iojknmiojknm

Since this is Applejack we're talking about, maybe the arms should be a bit more muscular. They don't have to be as much as those muscular commissions, lol, but I think it'd help a lot.

SigmasonicX

Her left rib area looks weird to me. Maybe her lower body needs to be curve it and shift it down a little bit more to line up with the upper body. But other than that looks good, and you don't even need to draw cameltoe for her, only pubic hair if you planning that. Also here's my edit how I think should looks like. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WBPnXgVbOSziJxvOqTHimXMuOdF043e5/view

RD42

You don’t sound too confident heh

Grant Hynd


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