FBBH 65
Added 2023-07-23 00:55:56 +0000 UTCTired but the chapter is done. I appreciate eve
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Good chapter! Kuroka makes her move and the match between Rias and Sona is soon! Also a surprise Barthomeloi visit. I can’t wait to see the tournament start! Keep up the good writing!
Archer
2023-07-31 09:27:08 +0000 UTCDespite my previous criticism, which I still stand by, this is in my top 5 FSN fanfics. Especially how you meld the dxdverse and nasuverse without the normal Shirou gets transported, reincarnated, or summoned into a different universe. Keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter.
Basti Fortuna
2023-07-28 08:13:35 +0000 UTCHaha. I'm sorry for all that, but if you read my other reviews you'll know that I tend to overextending things a lot. And I love theories.
Lacró
2023-07-23 07:26:08 +0000 UTCAnd the best change was Shirou, I feel like he was more active. Almost the entire previous arc was oscillating between active and passive. It was really annoying. And my boy already accepts his titles. That's good.
Lacró
2023-07-23 07:23:58 +0000 UTC6. The most important. I honestly believed that the repercussions of Lakmia would be seen up to the RG of Rias against Zaira. But it seems that we are in a difficult situation. "Rules and consequences," the good JohnW would say. And Ravel's revenge comes with everything. Not only did he tear Seekvaira to pieces off camera but he plans to destroy the gremory and Rias is in great danger. If Sona succeeds and they invoke a curative NP. It would be the End of MS the only thing they currently have because Shirou will no longer sell swords and with NP's promise for his nobility there is no doubt that they will support the Auros academy. Even if it goes wrong to have human bombs with weapons, it would be of great value to them. Shirou will have to get his act together or they are going to destroy the Gremory piece by piece. Rias' attitude will take its toll on everyone and his brother will not be able to do anything. Was Kuroka hired by Ravel to take the pieces of Agares and Gremory off the board?
Lacró
2023-07-23 07:22:52 +0000 UTC5. Lorelei. That woman who owns my soul. I didn't really expect it. Although it was a little strange to me that I considered having descendants. As I remember that woman, what she had the most was pride. And that leaves us with the doubt of whether Mephisto knows about the RM by Zelretch. Even if she stays with my boy Shirou, I'll be happy. It's just about 3 years to see her again. I hope we don't go into hiatus hehe.
Lacró
2023-07-23 07:22:10 +0000 UTC4. Will Luvia's sister appear in Kyoto as a member of the Heroes faction or will it be in Grauzauberer?
Lacró
2023-07-23 07:21:13 +0000 UTC3. Now, the religion of Medusa. I like how we progressively see a calm increase in this one. Everything is calm and his interactions with Miguel were also good (Caren appeared, although you had me there and I thought it was Kiara. Can you imagine the disaster that would have been?). But religions will always have their bloody history and that of Medusa is not exempt from it. Medusa will have to face many more challenges and that's beautiful. When Rizevim attacks the sky, it will be the wheel that turns for his decisions. And maybe I'll suffer from them. As the Arches pass. Demonic Beast Riot, The Attack on Heaven, Greece, The Church Rebellion. All this will be about her and hell I can't stand the emotion. In addition to all that, it is rare that she has almost no solitary interactions with Shirou. We really need to focus on that front as well
Lacró
2023-07-23 07:20:39 +0000 UTC2. Ajuka. I honestly don't know what's wrong with me, first it was Azazel and now Ajuka. I don't trust them. After everything they had to go through and the mountain of corpses to stack for the 'evil piece' system, I don't think Beelzebu didn't design an automatic registration of all the pieces. He really should know about the true nature of Akeno, this whole circus is most likely an experiment to see if the Queen mutates. Maybe a white piece or something different. And if there is someone that Shirou will surely hate in the future, it will be him. Sona's NPs do not yet appear and Ajuka does not seem to know anything, but surely he is aware that the heroic spirits who ceded their NPs do not possess the nobility of Sitri. I mean, imagine the disaster if a caster begins to control all of them and a disaster can be made. And how the King Piece were stolen probably by the other Lucifug is worrying. Let's say that Rivezim has half of Khaos Brigade, 20 King piece and probably because of Zolgen he has dead Apostles.
Lacró
2023-07-23 07:19:53 +0000 UTC1. Odin. I liked what he did. And I hope that this approach is maintained. It gives me hope that we will go to Asgard for Ragnarok. Maybe he has to ask the demons for help or how King of the Aesir will decide what to swallow them. Another point about the Evil Piece that I find attractive is with the Yokais. When Yoruichi was there, she was practically on vacation with all the ORC boys and we never saw her in her role as King. We probably have a greater focus in Kyoto and I hope so, seeing the 4 Kings of Kyoto watch over those yokais who fell under those experiments gives a lot to talk about and Kyoto will be able to demand that royalties be paid for all the nekomatas they murdered and for them to have a peace and alliance probably Sesshomaru will demand that Shirou marry one of his daughters I mean, the bases are sitting. Jaken already screwed up by telling him that he is an unverified Miko and all his military successes give him more value. So you have the pieces, just pull them together. I wanted Kyoto to go to Rin but we will have to continue with Setsuna.
Lacró
2023-07-23 07:19:03 +0000 UTC"Difficult times create strong men." It is a pleasure to share a new chapter with you Author. This chapter felt like a breath of fresh air. Loaded with Characters and a lot of energy. The previous ones had a very exhausting vibe and half of the chapters were tasteless. But our current dance knew how to keep the note high at all times. And Mephisto takes the MVP. Now I have a few points that I would like to say:
Lacró
2023-07-23 07:18:16 +0000 UTCAlso I can't believe that Mephistopheles tried to arrange shirou and lorelei together. That shit would be apocalyptic. Also I wonder where zelretch is? I would assume hiding out so this universe doesn't infect the others. That could be bad.
Grant Walker
2023-07-23 04:28:33 +0000 UTCAppreciate the update! Thanks for the hard work.
Meme33
2023-07-23 03:21:34 +0000 UTCthe last time we saw each other you just had barely awakened after a god knocked you up.”
Grant Walker
2023-07-23 01:27:36 +0000 UTCThings to fix
Grant Walker
2023-07-23 01:27:31 +0000 UTC
