FBBH 62
Added 2023-06-04 21:25:28 +0000 UTCNew PC stutters a bit and sometimes the old mon
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You are 13thsephiroth, right? Have been reading your comments over the last few days, happy to have you. Don't know if it will solve your problems considering that Aphrodite will only start making moves once the Hero Faction is taken out, for a very specific reason, but at least I can gurantee to you we won't have a plot line like chapter 63 again as the goals there, show one of the future bad guys and prepare the terrain for her insidious plot, has already been accomplished.
Ronaldo Souza
2023-07-27 20:57:19 +0000 UTCUntil now this fic is soooo good and I subscribed on your pat due to the fact that I enjoyed the 2 days of non-stop reading up until this point so that's my contribution! Though based on the reviews, which I hate cause I read it in advance, I'm dreading the next chapter. For someone who makes a story that's a harem without lemons, I wouldn't think rape would be an integral plot device. Sure character death, but not rape. So hopefully the 2 chapter buffer would resolve the problem like most of your plots that at least resolves or partially resolves in the same pattern.
Basti Fortuna
2023-07-27 19:35:53 +0000 UTCThanks for telling me, almost can't believe I missed that. I mean, I understand when I miss something but that one was just a shame. Still it is corrected thanks to you, thank you.
Ronaldo Souza
2023-06-20 22:52:04 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always, though I think you had a typo somewhere in there. I think the quotes was something like “raised his arms in the arms” but the second one should’ve be “air” instead. Otherwise it was all good in my eyes.
Brian Comston
2023-06-20 22:32:57 +0000 UTCI just wanted to say I'm enjoying your changes to the preexisting narrative of highschool DXD. Though admittedly I wasn't a huge fan of shriou being the one to fight vali at the peace meeting but I came around to it. Looking forward to see how your gonna handle the infamous juggernaut drive scene.
Fredrick Phillips
2023-06-13 17:33:12 +0000 UTCRossweiss was brutaly beautiful or beautiful brutal? Still debating which one it was. And Akeno's wings? Chef kiss for that one, well done :D
Darashon
2023-06-05 07:21:36 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter! The payoff on Akenos combat development is here, I really liked the imagery of her with purple wings, a violet aura, and lightning chains with nails like Medusas. Lakmia got what was coming to her, although I feel like it might have been more satisfying to see her judged by Rias and Zeoticus, but she had already figured out how they would judge her so that’s something. For Shirou being taught a single primeval rune, that was cool and unexpected, I’m curious on which primeval rune Odin taught him and just how he’ll be able to make use of it. Also want to mention again I’m glad that you’re still writing and I hope you have no other issues with your computers in the future!
Archer
2023-06-05 06:59:40 +0000 UTCGood chapter! Thank you for your hard work!
Meme33
2023-06-04 23:27:18 +0000 UTCWorth a shot haha
James Green
2023-06-04 22:54:45 +0000 UTCSpoilers.
Ronaldo Souza
2023-06-04 22:54:18 +0000 UTCThat makes sense. Will shirou be learning more in the future then? And, at the risk of sounding dumb, will he be able to use them like others can - Norse Magic, or will he be limited to enchanting his equipment?
James Green
2023-06-04 22:52:30 +0000 UTCOdin gave one rune but he isn't the sole authority and others may have shared more without his knowledge. Scathach would at least know more than one while Cu would know as many as Scathach would be willing to teach him.
Ronaldo Souza
2023-06-04 22:47:48 +0000 UTCSo, does that mean that Scathach and Cu only got a single Primeval Rune in their time?
James Green
2023-06-04 22:34:45 +0000 UTCSeeing Rossweiss kick Lakmia ass was the highlight of my week, it was worth the wait daamn, really cool
Jair Marinho Cardoso da Silva Júnior
2023-06-04 22:02:41 +0000 UTCI was going to put "you are as beautiful as the day you left" but that would be exaggerating too much hahaha. thanks for the chapter
num
2023-06-04 21:59:24 +0000 UTC
