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Brooke Goes To College part 5 page 3

I wanted to get Scratch's intro finished before the end of the month.

Brooke Goes To College part 5 page 3

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She's always had them, they come packaged with the Daddy Issues

HowardHam

I love Scratch's design, the scrunkly, rough, and mysterious ally cat vibe is rarely depicted among male feline anthros. It's a concept that gets overlooked way too often.

xXHepCatXx

Yep and then to make sure he's loyal all her friends are going to hit on him upon first meeting him, because that's what good friends do. Hell maybe they'll bone him, multiple times, just to be sure. I hope she stays single forever and I hope Polly kicks her out. What she did totally triggered me, lol.

MidastheStallion

Ah! He seems to have a-void-ed her..!

JasonAW3

So in your mind do you hear sexy sax music play in the background as she tries to wrangle him in only for it to abruptly stop and then hear the sound of him speeding away on the bike?

Rapier4

:D

Vawlkus

Is Brooke maybe developing some trust issues??

Kara

🤣

SOU6900

Men love my pits!!! Right!? Ex lover: Well... uh.... it wouldn't hurt to put on a little bit of cologne...

DeltaWolf

Ha! This page is hilariously great! Nice work with the page composition here. The top and bottom panels mirroring each other work well for bookending the page, and Maya being in the same position while Brooke changes facing is a nice contrast. And Brooke's look at the end is funny and fun! Excellent expression and great posework to show her emotions. It's great that you can do intense looks so well! Speaking of Brooke, damn you made her look sexy in the middle! Again the posework is fantastic! It's impressive you can make a fully clothed character sexier than most actually naked furry porn online. Plus details like the sweat and musk effects were great touches. You really have a talent for conveying olfactory details in your art! It'd be great to see how far you can go with it! Lastly, great work with the dialog! The last panel is hilarious! Surely there are dozens of college guys that would line up for those pits. On top of that, you're good at showing characters' attitudes with their dialog. Scratch's curt lines really set him apart from Brooke's lines for instance. And great use of different font sizes plus font effects like bolding and italics for emphasis. Seems like things aren't getting any easier for Brooke. Interested to see where it goes from here!

Basque

Ooh! Good one.

Glenn Sellers

Not me. That ain't much that's a bigger turn-off for me than B.O.

Glenn Sellers

I was thinking the same thing. How long has it been now? A month?

Glenn Sellers

Brooke has an itch she could not Scratch.

Mari Mcgee

He a loyal one, you’ll get your own brookie

Ye big lad

My dude aint a simp

Nividust

Not a chance… lol

Frank

That third panel is prime material for a standalone piece, I think.

Buster Davison

I think men love your ass more Brooke.

Wildboy5699

Scratch: K byeeeee

Wildboy5699

Scratch a good dude Brooke needs to get laid

Ragingwerewolf

Hmm I believe Brooke is being meta with that last comment hehe, also scratch looks like an space mercenary in that biker outfit. Super 😎

Doomslayer69

Wow. That's not a red flag at all, Brooke. Hard to believe you're single....

MidastheStallion

Brooke is becoming kaori. That’s called full circle folks

Rose Head

Scratch is well aware of Who lives in that Den...

Antarctican

She just wants that shadow-wang.

Sneaky V

All in favor of the #StinkyPittyCommittee?

freakdiablo

Dang Scratch is too loyal XD

Whiskey Foxtrot Tango Charlie 141

Lol

pokediginut


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