Brooke Goes To College part 5 page 3
Added 2024-09-24 19:00:49 +0000 UTC
I wanted to get Scratch's intro finished before the end of the month.
She's always had them, they come packaged with the Daddy Issues
HowardHam
2024-10-05 22:41:04 +0000 UTC
I love Scratch's design, the scrunkly, rough, and mysterious ally cat vibe is rarely depicted among male feline anthros. It's a concept that gets overlooked way too often.
xXHepCatXx
2024-10-04 23:50:59 +0000 UTC
Yep and then to make sure he's loyal all her friends are going to hit on him upon first meeting him, because that's what good friends do. Hell maybe they'll bone him, multiple times, just to be sure. I hope she stays single forever and I hope Polly kicks her out.
What she did totally triggered me, lol.
MidastheStallion
2024-09-28 11:51:21 +0000 UTC
Ah! He seems to have a-void-ed her..!
JasonAW3
2024-09-27 05:56:34 +0000 UTC
So in your mind do you hear sexy sax music play in the background as she tries to wrangle him in only for it to abruptly stop and then hear the sound of him speeding away on the bike?
Rapier4
2024-09-25 00:58:02 +0000 UTC
:D
Vawlkus
2024-09-25 00:26:58 +0000 UTC
Is Brooke maybe developing some trust issues??
Kara
2024-09-24 23:49:28 +0000 UTC
🤣
SOU6900
2024-09-24 23:08:52 +0000 UTC
Men love my pits!!! Right!?
Ex lover: Well... uh.... it wouldn't hurt to put on a little bit of cologne...
DeltaWolf
2024-09-24 23:00:09 +0000 UTC
Ha! This page is hilariously great!
Nice work with the page composition here. The top and bottom panels mirroring each other work well for bookending the page, and Maya being in the same position while Brooke changes facing is a nice contrast. And Brooke's look at the end is funny and fun! Excellent expression and great posework to show her emotions. It's great that you can do intense looks so well!
Speaking of Brooke, damn you made her look sexy in the middle! Again the posework is fantastic! It's impressive you can make a fully clothed character sexier than most actually naked furry porn online. Plus details like the sweat and musk effects were great touches. You really have a talent for conveying olfactory details in your art! It'd be great to see how far you can go with it!
Lastly, great work with the dialog! The last panel is hilarious! Surely there are dozens of college guys that would line up for those pits. On top of that, you're good at showing characters' attitudes with their dialog. Scratch's curt lines really set him apart from Brooke's lines for instance. And great use of different font sizes plus font effects like bolding and italics for emphasis.
Seems like things aren't getting any easier for Brooke. Interested to see where it goes from here!
Basque
2024-09-24 21:56:33 +0000 UTC
Ooh! Good one.
Glenn Sellers
2024-09-24 21:45:33 +0000 UTC
Not me. That ain't much that's a bigger turn-off for me than B.O.
Glenn Sellers
2024-09-24 21:43:49 +0000 UTC
I was thinking the same thing. How long has it been now? A month?
Glenn Sellers
2024-09-24 21:41:16 +0000 UTC
Brooke has an itch she could not Scratch.
Mari Mcgee
2024-09-24 21:38:49 +0000 UTC
He a loyal one, you’ll get your own brookie
Ye big lad
2024-09-24 21:36:06 +0000 UTC
My dude aint a simp
Nividust
2024-09-24 20:28:05 +0000 UTC
Not a chance… lol
Frank
2024-09-24 19:57:52 +0000 UTC
That third panel is prime material for a standalone piece, I think.
Buster Davison
2024-09-24 19:40:51 +0000 UTC
I think men love your ass more Brooke.
Wildboy5699
2024-09-24 19:26:46 +0000 UTC
Scratch: K byeeeee
Wildboy5699
2024-09-24 19:26:15 +0000 UTC
Scratch a good dude
Brooke needs to get laid
Ragingwerewolf
2024-09-24 19:25:40 +0000 UTC
Hmm I believe Brooke is being meta with that last comment hehe, also scratch looks like an space mercenary in that biker outfit. Super 😎
Doomslayer69
2024-09-24 19:16:56 +0000 UTC
Wow. That's not a red flag at all, Brooke. Hard to believe you're single....
MidastheStallion
2024-09-24 19:16:44 +0000 UTC
Brooke is becoming kaori. That’s called full circle folks
Rose Head
2024-09-24 19:15:59 +0000 UTC
Scratch is well aware of Who lives in that Den...
Antarctican
2024-09-24 19:10:17 +0000 UTC
She just wants that shadow-wang.
Sneaky V
2024-09-24 19:06:22 +0000 UTC
All in favor of the #StinkyPittyCommittee?
freakdiablo
2024-09-24 19:04:55 +0000 UTC
Dang Scratch is too loyal XD
Whiskey Foxtrot Tango Charlie 141
2024-09-24 19:04:44 +0000 UTC
Lol
pokediginut
2024-09-24 19:04:04 +0000 UTC