Brooke Goes To College part 5 page 2
Added 2024-09-19 22:45:45 +0000 UTC
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There’s nothing quite like getting absolutely hammered by a silhouette
Texas Gent
2024-09-21 04:36:26 +0000 UTCI like the cut of his gib 😼
Fanjangil
2024-09-20 16:22:19 +0000 UTCAaaaaaaaaaand I just heard the beginning of the theme song 🤣
Far Bjorne
2024-09-20 14:40:34 +0000 UTCBro is a whole shadow
Sneaky V
2024-09-20 12:12:51 +0000 UTCKinda reminded of The Stig.
Rigel
2024-09-20 07:42:32 +0000 UTCCalling that man Darkrai. Dude is a shadow that knocks you out like a light 🫡
Raven Wolf
2024-09-20 06:49:45 +0000 UTCGood guy Scratch~
Viro Veteruscy
2024-09-20 03:15:55 +0000 UTCLet’s go!!!
Ye big lad
2024-09-20 01:37:33 +0000 UTCThe surfacing of Scratch the biker. I like it.
Antarctican
2024-09-20 01:10:28 +0000 UTCGreat to see this chapter kicking off with a bang! Also, good job handling the change between pages. The thin house shot first works like an establishing shot in a movie, and it being small means it doesn't take up space from the rest of the page. And showing Brooke still sweating at first is a nice detail to convey how this page continues from the last one. Things like this really show off your talent for comics and experience with them since these kind of little things people might not even think of but really make it flow much more smoothly. And great work with Polly and Scratch! Her drooling look and all the hearts are nice details to show how much she's enjoying it. Nice work with the scratch marks too, they're varied enough to look natural. And really interesting work with Scratch's fur and tail, his fur flying everywhere and tail breaking the panel border make him look even more wild. Also Maya's commentary is hilariously great! The final shot is an interesting one too. Scratch having more cat-like eyes makes him look more wild as well. Plus the helmet has very neat furgonomics for the ears! That's a fun little touch; it's always great to see details like that in furry settings! Thanks again for sharing your work Jay! Looking forward to seeing where this goes from here!
Basque
2024-09-20 00:28:09 +0000 UTCHa ha Mr N... I caught a sudden vision of Jay Naylor walking into a room wearing sunglasses and a T-shirt with a large N on it. Camera cuts to a tied up Adam West Batman "Mr. N! I might have known, you dastardly fiend!" Tied up Burt Ward Robin "Holy Consonants, Batman!"
A Patreon of the Ahts
2024-09-20 00:07:06 +0000 UTCCat caught the mousie...
JasonAW3
2024-09-19 23:57:07 +0000 UTCYeah, my first guess was astronaut but thought that too out there for this nice series
Doomslayer69
2024-09-19 23:09:27 +0000 UTCAll I keep thinking is a line from a Digital Underground song “You're taxin' it and waxin' it and workin' it around 'Til the booty starts makin' that clappin' sound” Love it as usual Mr. N 😁
Far Bjorne
2024-09-19 23:08:50 +0000 UTCWas wondering when he’d show up in the story
pokediginut
2024-09-19 23:08:39 +0000 UTCYeah. I guess I forgot to mention it. The next page will have him on it.
Jay Naylor
2024-09-19 23:08:18 +0000 UTCWasn't thinking of that but you're right 🤣🤣
Black fox
2024-09-19 23:04:48 +0000 UTCI see the Fisk… goes away for a while then comes back and basically takes his girl to pound town 😂 then goes away again…
Far Bjorne
2024-09-19 23:03:52 +0000 UTCSuch a wholesome couple, also is he a biker?
Doomslayer69
2024-09-19 23:03:08 +0000 UTCThe Void beckons
glitch
2024-09-19 23:01:40 +0000 UTCI like scratch's design...Hope he gets a Harem. All the badasses deserve a Harem 😎
MidastheStallion
2024-09-19 22:59:40 +0000 UTCI hope to achieve this type of love someday
Jay
2024-09-19 22:53:25 +0000 UTCDon't know why but I'm getting a fisk or Thomas sort of vibe off him, is it just me that has a weird sense or does anyone else see it
Black fox
2024-09-19 22:51:16 +0000 UTC
