SLIPPING INTO DEPRAVITY - Ch. 27 - Romance, Secrets and Semen
Added 2025-09-18 15:25:21 +0000 UTCROMANTIC INTERLUDE, PART THREE OF FOUR
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I respect your feelings, and yes, it is a bit of a swerve. It seemed to me that as I was building up to the Second Cuck, I wanted to take time out and show a relationship, the two of them bonding, and to showcase Sam. It's one of those things, it either works or it doesn't work for some people. You'll find I like to swerve a little. Driving down a straight line is predictable. I like to play around. So yes, I suspect that some Chapters will feel like a let down. But as long as I can deliver you hot ones that work for you, I think we're both happy and don't mind the occasional misses.
Eve St. Albert
2026-02-08 20:52:47 +0000 UTCThese last three chapters feel out of place to me. Not bad, just don't fit in the arc I was reading up till now. Because I've been on that journey, these three chapters were jarring and unwelcome, though I suspect I'm in a minority there. Maybe if it had been part of a grand build up before gravitating back to the bar that third time. Or maybe even Sam desperately trying to reclaim his sense of control after the first cuckold session but before meeting and going to the strip club. It is your story to tell though, so if you feel this suits the narrative best, then it suits, but thought I'd share my impression of it. Can't please everyone all the time :)
Drauga
2026-02-08 20:43:50 +0000 UTCI wanted you to love Sam. To admire him. To feel sweetness and joy for him. I wanted you to look at Sam, and see someone that Kayley could fall in love with, someone thrilling and imaginative, warm and human, capable of awesome kink, utterly romantic, and the sort of decency where he could make total strangers open up to him as if they were longtime friends. You see, that way, I could make the Cuckolding that much more painful and nightmarish. The next five chapters really put Sam through a woodchipper.
Eve St. Albert
2026-02-08 20:14:44 +0000 UTCOkay, one more chapter until I get caught up to my sneak preview of the second cuckolding. You should not be surprised to learn that it's impossible to read these chapters without plugging myself into Sam's position—he is (a.) amazingly talented and resourceful, and who wouldn't want that? and (b.) married to Kayley, a force of nature or maybe a figure of myth. Except by no means could I POSSIBLY live up to his abilities. Another superb work of authorship! Thank you!
DOylyCarte
2026-02-08 18:35:19 +0000 UTCLike them reconnecting but the chances they are taking with complete strangers could turn out very badly for both of them. Neither one of them are saying what needs to be said, or asking questions that need to be asked of the other, again this could turn sour for them, especially with a second Cuck session. And am I reading something into her finger fucking his ass set preparation for Leroy fucking him?
FU
2025-10-19 18:14:09 +0000 UTCSandy (Alexander) Theodore, security guard at the building. Sam knew him when they were both security guards. He wasn't one of Sam's original crew, the ones who set up the furniture on the rooftop that they used for breaks and parties. He came along later, but before Sam left. Sam still had connections to his old crew, he hangs out now and then, and they keep in touch. Enough to get to use the rooftop. Sam arranged through him, to plant the roses and cooler so it was waiting for them. The other guard on shift wasn't part of the old crew, and Sandy was nervous about getting fired, so they came up with the "Checking out the HVAC" shtick so he'd have plausible deniabiity if anything went wrong and they got caught. Basically, it took a fair bit of work and planning by Sam, and cooperation from old friends, to make it happen. As to whether he'll show up again, and in what role...
Eve St. Albert
2025-10-05 18:42:44 +0000 UTCI haven’t sussed the significance of S. Theodore yet. You mentioned it twice, so it means something. A literary or spiritual reference? Someone Kayley will have to fuck, now that we know she’s not attracted? Another Keith? You drop so many seeds in your story and it’s fun to guess when they’ll sprout. Like what’s Leroy going to do with the videos and access to Sam’s phone? You really do write Porn+.
Craig
2025-10-05 17:14:14 +0000 UTCThis is a fantastic chapter, Eve! We need to see this couple connect, before they embark on that dark journey with the second cuck session. I love the playful way Kayley and Sam are with each other. I do like the playful, intelligent, dialog – and the way they still are a “couple.” “It’s the reprieve before the storm hits. Sam. What a husband. Always trying to give Kayley something extraordinary, something amazing. Creative, loving, and so very, very sexy and sexual. So different from Leroy, who would soon take control of his wife. It’s hard knowing what’s coming, when we see them so carefree, playful, and so much in love on a day like this. I just love the dialog you write! Kayley is so funny: : “Oh look,” I called excitedly. “You can see my clitoris from here!” God, she’s funny! Such a playful couple. They were so happy together It’s so good: “Back, back vile creature!” I cried out, “Back to your filthy lair! Back to where you belong! … I glanced down, catching him, seeing the joyous look in his eyes.” And the descriptions of the orgasms Kayley has are incredible! Fuck, it is so arousing to watch Sam give her so much pleasure: “…my breath caught in my throat…… felt like an instantaneous avalanche of pleasure … overwhelmed and overpowered on so many levels my mind seemed to shut down… nearly an out of body experience … suspended In the sky with this orgasmic pleasure just running through me … the orgasm … rolling over me in waves and waves … myself squirting all over him, and I didn’t want it to stop … I felt I was going to explode … and I couldn’t stop coming … … I was shivering uncontrollably … “Oh fuck, I was waiting for this all day. And fuck, that was worth waiting for! Oh my God.” Fuck, that woman can really cum! And Sam can give her an orgasm more powerful than any other man has given her. Kayley figures it out: : “This whole day has just been foreplay, hasn’t it?” “For some reason I started giggling, then Sam was giggling, then we were laughing, and I was safe in his arms, looking out over this amazing landscape, topped by the most breathtaking blue sky I had ever seen, and the world was the most beautiful I’d ever seen it. “I love you so fucking much,” I said.” If only we could capture this in a bottle. If only we could prevent them from the heartache we are about to experience. This moment, perfect sexual satisfaction held together by perfect love for each other. Some day they will reflect back on this panicle moment – this literal mountain top experience – and wonder why they ever threw it away. This story is written with the most amazing dramatic touch, Eve. You really have a masterpiece here. Sure, I Know that it’s erotica – and a very dirty, depraved variety, but it’s so much more than that. This is true drama, of the best kind. And this kind of writing doesn’t get any better, anywhere: “trading kisses, each one a tender miracle, like snowflakes, no two alike.” It’s so sad to know that just days away, those tender miracles would be tossed aside. You gotta love this line: “I was drunk on orgasms and vertigo.” It truly was a perfect day: “I loved to hear him laugh. I could listen to it all day. There was something so joyful in his laugh, so pure, so soulful … “You really pulled it off,” I said … You made it magic.” And then reality check. Sam knew Kayley betrayed him: “You let him come inside you?” he asked casually. And then her sudden realization: “It occurred to me that I’d never lied to Sam, not before Leroy.” And these lies, and her hidden betrayal (taking stranger’s cum inside her pussy) left her with a terrible feeling: “Suddenly, I felt trapped, like I needed to navigate carefully. It was a feeling I’d never had around Sam, and I didn’t like it one bit.” But Sam – who gave her this truly mountain top experience, and most amazing set of orgasms, even after knowing he had been betrayed, does not judge her; does not condemn her. And your next paragraph is such perfect writing. It crystalizes the moment so well. “I realized at the moment, he really didn’t care. No, that wasn’t right. It just didn’t bother him which one did. It didn’t matter to him if it was all three. I was what mattered. I was what always mattered to him. Suddenly, I felt both elated and ashamed.” The thrill of knowing she is loved that much by Sam -- that she always mattered more to him than anything else; and that thrill snuffed out by the shame of realizing that her own sexual thrill was more important to her than Sam, causing her to betray him and lie to him to cover up her betrayal. Sam is stronger than any man I know, when he tells Kayley this: “I think that the key is,” he said slowly. “It has to be your choice. Your choice to do it. Or to stop. It’s about where you are with it, and with yourself.” … he laid a comforting hand on me. “But if...” “…he meant that if I needed support or safety, he'd be there. If that’s what I wanted, he’d help. Guard me, defend, recruit, whatever” And then Sam takes her to another spot on the top of the building, and romances her some more, and gives her more orgasms. He leaves behind her betrayal. He is a good man. Sam confirms my suspicion about his motives to plan this amazing day. As I said in an earlier comment, Sam is worried about the second cuck session (hell, he should have called it off, but he loves his wife too much to deny her what she craves). So, this day was designed for them to connect in a deep way, to solidify their love and marriage, and to form a protective guard around them as they embarked on the cuck session with Leroy/ Sam refers to this in a roundabout way: “I wanted the two of us to have this,” he said. He shrugged. “I kind of felt like time’s running out. You know?” Kayley disappointed me with her response – or lack of response. She knew why he was a little “sad and thoughtful,” but she didn’t want to think about it. She thinks to herself: Don’t be sad … You and I, together forever and ever, I promise”, but she doesn’t say it out loud. Why not, Kayley? Don’t get me wrong, Eve, it’s the right way to write this scene. It truly is. But it’s so sad that Sam is trying to pull Kayley close to him because he’s afraid Leroy is going to pull them apart in a few days, and Kayley goes silent – because she doesn’t want to address his fear. Her desire to pursue her sexual craving is more important to her than Sam. Once again, she chooses her own desires over her husband. Just the opposite of what Sam did for her today. It’s so tragic. Sam hits on what made this day so great for him – for them. They are in it together, to benefit both of them: It felt like we were in it together that we were both participating and coming up with stuff … something between us … that made it beautiful … It was ours” And there is his fear. What is about to happen with Leroy will no longer be “theirs.” God, I loved these chapters – and this one truly is the panicle so far. I needed this, before the depravity that follows, before the heartbreak hits, before Sam’s heart is broken. Fabulous, intelligent, creative and oh so fucking good writing, Eve. I love these characters!
TJ Rogue
2025-10-02 15:51:39 +0000 UTCIncredible! We are not worthy.
Scott C
2025-09-24 20:48:45 +0000 UTCThat's a strange journey. I'll tell you sometime.
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-23 23:21:14 +0000 UTCBut I am genuinely interested in what motivates authors' writing (out of a natural curiosity, on my part). I hope you are not put off by our curiosity - I think most of it is because we like your writing - and your characters, so much. It is quite rare to find anyone writing in this genre who writes so intelligently, and so eloquently (a strange word to use in this context), and with so much obvious passion, that inspires (in your readers) so much interest - and admiration.
A Philosophical Doctor
2025-09-23 20:33:26 +0000 UTCI am reassured.
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-23 13:30:07 +0000 UTCIt was just a throw-away remark; as you might have guessed by now, I'm just here for the sex (like everybody else) - and because I love your characters!
A Philosophical Doctor
2025-09-23 09:19:29 +0000 UTCNo worries. I've been saving Keith for later. Honestly, do you need to keep notes. This is porn. I think I'd love it if someone said "wow, this was incredibly hot and I masturbated/fingered until I ejaculated/squirted over XXXX scene." If someone came to me and said "I've kept detailed notes." I might be a little thrown. And then I'd probably ask to borrow them so I can figure out who has done what to whom and how they did it. But I think my best case scenario is if someone read it, got off on it lots and lots, really enjoyed the characters and fell in love with them.... and then a year later, went back and reread it, got off lots and lots, and discovered a bunch of things they didn't notice the first time through. :)
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-23 08:14:55 +0000 UTCThanks Craig (and Eve). I can see I must start keeping better notes (as I tell my own students!).
A Philosophical Doctor
2025-09-23 07:04:09 +0000 UTCMy girl is serious about her power tools.
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-23 02:12:41 +0000 UTCLove the latest chance to see them explore and love each other before the absolute destruction that awaits Sam. Another great read and love the playful banter amidst raunchy sex and situations. One of my biggest laughs? Seeing "40 story vibrator" as the first story tag... 🤣😂🤣
sercurious
2025-09-23 01:56:45 +0000 UTC
