SLIPPING INTO DEPRAVITY - Ch. 26, Romance, Lies and Semen
Added 2025-09-05 19:49:28 +0000 UTCROMANTIC INTERLUDE, PART TWO OF FOUR
KAYL
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I'm totally slithery.
Eve St. Albert
2026-02-07 20:24:13 +0000 UTCThis chapter is a perfect example to show what an artisan you are with language. Thank you for your hot, hot, hot writing and for how comfortably it slithers into the reader's brain!
DOylyCarte
2026-02-07 19:47:00 +0000 UTCOh my gosh! thank you so much! I'm not in their league and we both know it. But thank you!
Eve St. Albert
2025-10-09 19:42:35 +0000 UTCYou're totally welcome!
Eve St. Albert
2025-10-09 19:41:51 +0000 UTC'til reading Kayley & Sam's adventures I'd always have put Anne Rice and Laura Reece as my favorite female erotica writers. Your imagination and your writing skill is better than both. Luckily for us you have a filthy mind that won't quit. I'm in awe. These adventures - lead by Sam! - are just so 'wholesomely dirty' and pleasant. Hayley seems to be in a safer place with Sam as her pimp.
Bob Fogarty
2025-10-09 18:04:47 +0000 UTCEve, Thank you.
Bob Fogarty
2025-10-09 18:03:04 +0000 UTCIt will be brutal, and Kayley will be ferocious. I love how much you liked it.
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-26 20:03:18 +0000 UTCEve! You have done it again with an absolute masterpiece! I’ll spare you the super, super, long, detailed commentary I gave you in the last chapter (ch. 25) -- this wil probably be too long as it is -- but this was pure joy and absolute arousal to read. Kayley’s dialog (both verbalized and her internal debates) are brilliant, witty and funny, as ever. And the “carnality and degradation” tour of “derelicts, degenerates and reprobates” (great phrasing) is out-of-control, hot and sexy. This really got me worked up! I love getting to know this couple more and more. They are romantic, sexy and depraved, all rolled into one package. The subway ride was incredible! Kayley thrilled at the “boldness and terror” of going too far, and grew more excited at the “anticipation and revulsion” at how much further things could go (great contrasts). She loves the extremes, but it’s made possible by Sam being there, providing her safety net -- her security. That’s what made it possible for Kayley to engage in “wildly exciting, and wildly dangerous” sexual fun with complete strangers. You know it’s dangerous when Kayley is scared, but Sam reassured her that he had her: “He knew my reservations. Somehow that gave me courage.” By the way, I love you adding this line: “Into the breach rode the six hundred,” he whispered. “Into the unknown.” I didn’t expect to see a line from “The Charge of the Light Brigade,” but it was perfect. With his second cuck session just days away, Sam carves out a day of sexual adventure just for them; giving Kayley a stream of dirty, sexual thills (a day of “joyously, perversely, kinky fun.” a “thrilling adventure of daring and risk”). Out of love he gives her the kinky sexual fun she craves, without Leroy being involved – as if to reclaim her and show her that they don’t need Leroy for a dirty adventure. It’s as if he’s grounding her, and their marriage, for fear of what is to come; for fear of losing her to Leroy. And to a degree, it works. Except, we see the truly darker, dirty side of Kayley as she takes the cum of three complete strangers in her cunt, without Sam’s knowledge. In fact, she intentionally hides it from Sam. So even though Sam fulfills her kinky dreams on this day, she needs the further thrill of taking it farther than Sam would want, and keeping it hidden from the man she loves – because it’s dirty, filthy, and gives her a sexual thrill to not only take a stranger’s cum (“His ejaculation inside me had been primordially satisfying”), but to hide it from her husband “literally under Sam’s nose” (“I loved being bad, in a way I could hardly fathom”). Considering that it was Sam’s protection over her that gave her the confidence, and ability, to embrace this depravity, it’s ironic that part of the thrill is hiding a deeper part of her depravity from him (“it made me feel naughty, like I had a special secret of my own”). Her ”perfect day” brings her to enthuse her love for Sam: “I’m totally in love with you.” But already we see the signs that Sam’s efforts to ground and bind his wife to him will fail, because in the midst of this wonderful day of sexual fun shared as a couple, she is already pulling away from Sam, and hiding her darker depravity from him – and getting a thrill in doing so right under his nose. We can only shudder to think what she will do to him in his cuck session to his face. Love this perverted chapter of sexual fun. So fucking hot!
TJ Rogue
2025-09-26 19:25:54 +0000 UTCI had a thought. The whole subway excursion and follow up can be seen as a similar transgression of marital boundaries as what's been happening with Leroy, EXCEPT - - Sam is in control of who does what to Kaylie (with the exception of her surreptitious semen gathering obsession), and Kaylie doesn't know who any of her playmates are, so no going back to see "that guy", and no intrusion on their marital relationship. Mind you, I don't know that Sam is consciously thinking along these lines, but I think at least some of this thought process is going on unconsciously.
Allen R
2025-09-15 22:40:33 +0000 UTCExactly.
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-11 23:47:26 +0000 UTCI'm just contrasting Chapter 1, where both Kayley and Sam were fairly shocked that a total stranger wanted her to have sex with him in the men's room, with now, when they're on a subway car, and Sam has set her up to be groped, and who knows what else, by a series of total strangers. They've certainly made quite a journey to get here from the starting point. And then Kayley describing Sam as her pimp, and using the scenario from her earlier nightmare as sex talk - - a nightmare that freaked her out at the time. However this turns out, they are not going to be the same people they started out as.
Allen R
2025-09-11 21:14:39 +0000 UTCOf course, but not in the next chapter.
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-09 22:52:22 +0000 UTCSo reckless and so hot! Everything in the sleazy office building especially. I noted that once again Kayley is called a pig. And this chapter’s literary nod is to Tennyson. Things did not go well for the 600. Subtle foreshadowing?
Craig
2025-09-09 22:48:40 +0000 UTCI like the way you discuss Kayley and Sam as if they were somewhat wilful (and rather naughty) children who can't yet fully control their emotions. Although we are expecting there to be 'tears before bedtime', I hope their 'hard landing' won't break them (or at least they will bounce back).
A Philosophical Doctor
2025-09-09 15:52:33 +0000 UTCKayley has willingly taken three cocks, and even more, three loads of cum in her vagina, literally under Sam's nose. More, she enjoyed taking the semen without him realizing. And taking the third cock, literally behind his back. Despite that, she acknowledges the sex wasn't all that great. There's some stuff going on with her, Leroy's corrosion is having an effect. But the corrosion affects them both. Sam might have taken her out on an adventure, but he and they wouldn't have taken it as far. They're in a kind of sexual free fall, which Leroy has pushed because it makes them more controllable. But free fall means there's a hard landing sooner or later. As to other matters - Sam doesn't get much attention, as I've noted, so I wanted to show him off a little, both his creativity and sexiness, which we've seen, but also his general character. As to the banter - I love writing that. A favorite moment for me is when she's riffing off on the three black guys, when suddenly, she realizes under their new sexual opening, he might just get her three hung, muscular black guys for her birthday.
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-07 00:07:48 +0000 UTCHope feeling better.
WILLMAC
2025-09-06 22:11:47 +0000 UTCSam is such a social butterfly - he makes others want to engage with him. Loved how Kayley let the other two men cum in her, while hiding that little bity piece of info from Sam. “Into the breach rode the six hundred,” he whispered. “Into the unknown.” I loved that scene of Tim McGraw when he quoted that...and I have most of his CD's also. Him and I share something in common that's real. The sexual banter between these two is off the charts....Kayley seems to want that special B-day present really, really bad. Eve, so glad to see you're back - maybe not 100% yet, but you'll get there. Just remember... “An ounce of patience is worth more than a ton of preaching.” - Mahatma Gandhi.
Larry Hunt
2025-09-06 14:39:58 +0000 UTC
