Burrows Build 0.2 (PC/Mac)
Added 2021-11-20 22:22:31 +0000 UTCEnjoy! The updates are as follows:
-New Title Screen
-Story Update (Mark Day 2)
-CTC/UI Updates
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1wE3ZXoY8fEKV3E5sWKXt_e5wWoAH4cxv?usp=sharing
Comments
There is a part near the end where Mark's goes from his Robe Sprite to his Fully Dressed Sprite without any explanation. There is part where Mark says that is "Sunday" even though the title card says "Monday" "I didn't want to talk about it, but it happened 3 years ago." It is a little weird seeing the number 3 when the word "twenty" appeared a few lines ago.
Unagi
2021-11-22 17:28:09 +0000 UTCCajun should be capitalized.
Unagi
2021-11-22 16:19:55 +0000 UTCYeah, this happens a lot.
Unagi
2021-11-22 15:50:15 +0000 UTCI just remembered that Grey uses the word "helicopters" but I don't think those were invented during or before Prohibition.
Unagi
2021-11-21 17:58:12 +0000 UTCLoved this build! Keep up the great work ♥
Yuki
2021-11-21 17:40:00 +0000 UTCearshot is one word not two
Unagi
2021-11-21 17:37:41 +0000 UTCMaybe I haven't been to NYC enough but seeing someone refer to the Empire State Building to a newcomer as "Empire State" seems a little weird.
Unagi
2021-11-21 16:56:03 +0000 UTClight headed should be hyphenated.
Unagi
2021-11-21 16:48:48 +0000 UTC"Yes, very observant, Mr.Grey!" There should be a space after "Mr."
Unagi
2021-11-21 16:39:32 +0000 UTCsugar cubes is two words not one.
Unagi
2021-11-21 16:34:18 +0000 UTCThe Background Noise in the first café scene is considered music when it should be sound.
Unagi
2021-11-21 16:19:36 +0000 UTC
