Epidemic #1 - BE - Chapter 1
Added 2022-09-24 20:43:40 +0000 UTCHello everyone,
You voted for what you wanted first, Breast expansion won out. Here is chapter one for you all, let me know what you think, Chapter 2 will be out tomorrow :)
Edit: Correct version Upload :)
Comments
Thanks for the feedback, upon re-reading, I uploaded the version before a proof read :P I've just corrected it :D
Growing Desires
2022-09-25 12:41:42 +0000 UTCA bit short for a chapter I guess but it's just the intro. There's a few places where you use "you" as if you're talking to the reader, but this doesn't make sense. It has potential though. Just not enough content to really comment on it.
Samwise
2022-09-25 06:34:24 +0000 UTC
