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Added 2024-02-10 19:00:28 +0000 UTC“Commence final doubling,” Erick said, in the c
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fxd!
Arcs
2024-03-08 01:17:51 +0000 UTCThe roof of this ritual space was done. --- I think done is supposed to be gone.
Findell
2024-03-06 09:45:50 +0000 UTCHis schtick is to take the truth and twist it massively to make himself look like the hero while also using lies of omission to cover up details he can't twist effectively. So yeah he is probably lying his ass off we just don't know how yet exactly.
tibbish
2024-02-15 08:28:46 +0000 UTCThe dark mark reacting to Nothaganathor make me feel like his story might not be a complete lie this time. I smell another major plot teist incoming.
Spark
2024-02-11 12:55:33 +0000 UTCEach of those scenes showing people getting the personal script had me tearing up. Specifically the wording of the script offer they all recieved and the timings. I was trying to eat lunch at work and had to keep stop reading and taking a second so I wouldn't actually cry at work and have to explain that. I was a bit relieved when those perspectives stopped so I could stop tearing up lol. Great chapter.
Emily Gurnavage
2024-02-11 03:17:03 +0000 UTCkrommy boi : brah! eric: bruh
thomas j walters
2024-02-10 22:23:05 +0000 UTCThat final conversation kinda has Erick seeming a little melodramatic. Seems unlike him. I mean, he's permanently in his dramatic flair to avoid all his Infinite mental problems that he dodges, but this seemed a little much even for that.
Patchumz
2024-02-10 21:35:01 +0000 UTCOh yeah and the fact that Erick is constantly trying to break a toxic cycle while convincing others to do same is admirable and I’m worried he is getting burnt out just trying to do good and help others.
Zero
2024-02-10 21:12:47 +0000 UTCIt's odd how we've had a number of chapters in a row where Erick gets stronger, his plans come to fruition and succeed, and yet, the future feels less and less hopeful. I dearly love this story, but I'm starting to feel some of the tiredness that Erick is. Part of me just wants the war to be over, one way or the other, but the other part of me doesn't want that because I know the story will soon be over then.
Matt H
2024-02-10 20:44:43 +0000 UTCHuh well then I knew Nothanganthor was an ass hole but wow I’m hoping Erick kicks his ass massively. Im kinda interested as to how everything changes now that the everyone on Veird is so much more powerful. Thanks for the chapter. I’m looking forward to what happens next. Edit: Question that just popped up in my head, but I wonder what Shadow, Fairy Moon, and Gregarious will answer of Notty’s claims. Also other side comment now that I think about it Notty’s whole argument is still rooted in power and abusive dynamics that perpetuate a shitty cycle. While I don’t totally agree with Erick at times. I hope that the people around him notice that he consistently is trying to break out of a cycle of negative interactions and help people live a better life. In other words fuck Nothanganthor cause i see so many toxic behaviors that I can’t stand. I appreciate how well you have written all these characters and the effort you put into the worldbuilding
Zero
2024-02-10 20:43:55 +0000 UTCNotty still sucks and in a cool story still murder bro kind of way. Really exciting to see what up with the people who hit with tje the rawest deal on the other side hope we get to see more of them "rescued" by valkeries
Jackjargon
2024-02-10 20:41:58 +0000 UTCInteresting chapter. The claiming of Fenrir is cool and the arrival of Cascadio was fun. Notty can go to hell and honestly should stop talking cause he's a lying whenever he speaks. (Honestly he can go away) .
Heru Kane
2024-02-10 20:32:58 +0000 UTC
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