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Added 2022-06-19 03:22:55 +0000 UTCThe morning arrived as it normally did; without
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fixd!
Arcs
2022-06-21 21:49:34 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter! Possible edit: At times you have Gamble instead of Gambler when referring to the class.
Rebecca
2022-06-21 09:26:57 +0000 UTC“A good Knowledge Mage functions almost as the Sliding System we saw in Enduring Forge…” -> “functions almost as [well as]” or you could leave it as is. I like Sitnakov and hope Candlepoint’s people get well soon, those poor traumatized folk. And O’Lark and Kiri building what I’m calling “Benevolent Point” in my head is a joy. TFTC!!
Robbs
2022-06-20 14:49:02 +0000 UTCSitnakov needs some kind of ID made of stone with a blacklight attached, so that he fluoresces and shows up in dark rooms. Hope Erick gets a Knowledge Mage soon. Preferably more than one.
John Anastacio
2022-06-20 11:40:53 +0000 UTCTheir goddess and sort of boss told them hands off though
BaguaBrady
2022-06-20 01:49:24 +0000 UTCSlip has got to be my favorite minor character. Dude just wants to fish.
Logrus
2022-06-20 01:17:52 +0000 UTCLOL. like yeah, this is true, but you can make anything sound bad if you frame it right. It's a nuanced situation, imo~
Arcs
2022-06-19 20:52:13 +0000 UTCTo be clear, the superintelligent wizard demanded an apology from his former kill squad because he had extenuating circumstances for breaking into the world death place. The extenuating circumstances being he was a wizard going into the world death place that will cause the world to die if a wizard gets in there and breaks it. But he was still pretending he wasn't a wizard, despite it being heavily suspected by everyone that he was one, so it shouldn't count.
Bob
2022-06-19 16:18:21 +0000 UTCRofl i love O'Lark!
Seijax
2022-06-19 10:25:13 +0000 UTCImplosions.
Torbjørn Nilsen
2022-06-19 06:28:14 +0000 UTCfixed!
Arcs
2022-06-19 05:39:14 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter 'but she still present' <- needs to be fixed
Corwin Amber
2022-06-19 05:27:23 +0000 UTCI mean, the chapter both begins and ends with an explicit statement that there were no explosions and with Erick feeling like he sorta kinda maybe has a handle on things. So yeah...death and destruction incoming.
Collateral_ink
2022-06-19 05:03:34 +0000 UTCOh absolutely. And if not, the number of explosions when they eventually do happen will just increase.
Matt H
2022-06-19 04:40:08 +0000 UTCProbably
Foxmoor Fiction
2022-06-19 04:39:51 +0000 UTCNext chapter will have an explosion won't it?
Gunnar Crider
2022-06-19 04:21:01 +0000 UTC
