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194 - Start of Book 7

Poi approached the open door of Erick’s mage to

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fixed! thanks

Arcs

“You’re not hiding your Wizardly” > “Wizardry” Tftc!

Robbs

Solid chapter, great to se some loose dangling threads tied up. WRT to music movies the laptop and phones(s?) would a incredible treasure trove. Assuming of course Erick and Jane didn't just find a way to display and record their memories of certain songs and stories. For movie suggestions: The 13th Warrior, Star Wars (of course), Groundhog Day, and Manchester By the Sea. Music: 80's + 70's pop (cuz' Eric is 40-ish) and some 90's + mid 2000's pop (cuz' Jane is around 20-ish IIRC) along with some good ol' Bach or Chopin for classical. The range of the movies was chosen because it'd a interesting glimpse for the locals into life on Earth as well as our SciFi. The music is mostly because it fits with the characters and is also pretty good (IMO). Obviously everyone's opinions are going to vary here but as a starting off point it could be useful! Always did feel that the music and movie angle got shorted massively. Should've been a mini-arc at least on par with chocolate for just one of those things!

tibbish

souls degrade immediately after death unless measures are taken to prevent it; he likely believes that this degradation fundamentally changes who a person is even if brought back, making them soul abominations in a way

Tate Browder

Welcome back!

Joppest

So happy.

Avery Aderyn

Something I want to compliment you for is how well Erick's empathy is translated into the reader experience :)

s476

With every chapter I read, I just enjoy your story more

s476

The weekend magic is back. I love this story. Thank you.

Chris

Why is Kirgantharp so convinced that Messalina couldn't have made a true ressurection spell? Really want to know

Gavriel

I really enjoyed this chapter. My only regret is there was not a part where someone asked about his eyes flickering with lightning!

Bryce

fixed! thanks

Arcs

Yay! Thank you for the new chapter. Hope you enjoyed your week off :) 'will probably will be' -> 'will probably be'

Corwin Amber

Awesome, best Saturday in a while. Thank you Arcs!

Wyatt

Awesome reintroduction to the slice of life

Jacob Gondringer

Welcome back! Glad to finally see some sort of light coming from the end of Ericks endless tunnel.

Owen Kasaboski

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Jamie Idle


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