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Time stood still for two more moments, and then

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I personally just dislike just about all fae bullshit, plus I find her very annoying to read. I don't hate her I just want the story to stop being focused around her.

I don't get all the hate for fairy moon. She is such an interesting character. So far all her actions have lead to Erick gaining g power and leading to a stable future. Your all but hurt that she has power over Erick. There are tons of stories of faeries doing exactly what Fairy Moon did and never once is it mentioned as mind rape. I think you guys just live a little too vicariously through the MC.

Overclocked

This story has never really been about terrible endings for anyone. I doubt that will change now. Why do you think she deserves a worse punishment then the people who run stratagolds forgotten campaigns and their mind mages?

Bsreads

Wow, arcs! — “Suddenly, an idea came to Erick. One that spoke to his heart, and all of his experiences on Veird. A culmination. He spoke, “But benevolence without the power and will and action to cause good and prevent evil is not benevolence at all; it is just wishful thinking.” — a beautiful summation of Erick’s journey on both Earth and Veird. Can’t help but feel that Erick nears the end of his path, and it’s bittersweet. Looking forward to next week!

Robbs

Latter half of the chapter was real good but the first half had waaaay to much of fairy's crap to be likable. All that double talk, gaslighting, and mind control is just awful to read on its own. Having Eric suddenly go dancing after all that happened just made it more unbelievable. I can understand him, being who he is, trying to work things out non-violently as much as possible. But at some point even someone like him would start getting either pissed off or exasperated with her nonsense. They'd want to minimize their contact as much as possible at a minimum.

tibbish

I have come to accept that no matter how long the chapters are I will always feel they ended too soon.

Chris

Thanks fo the chapter, hopefully something specially horrid happens to the mind rapist fae moon soon.

Pancho

Thanks

enleed

Thanks for the chapter

Nicholas Cummins


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