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Added 2022-04-10 04:58:47 +0000 UTCThe sun cast light into Erick’s room at a sligh
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'never going to be allowed' -> 'never going to allow' 'bloodline though the methods' though -> through
Corwin Amber
2022-05-02 00:14:53 +0000 UTCI love this chapter. Short but sweet.
Akin
2022-04-15 04:10:43 +0000 UTCThe new element looking like primal lightning I really like. Hard for people to ignore a problem that looks like it is covered in universe-ending lightning.
Chris
2022-04-12 21:27:14 +0000 UTCI just finished 2 months worth of chapters on Royal Road and I just had this weird feeling that something big was happening and that I should get the Patreon chapters. Boy was I right, I went from Erik just showing up in Stratagold to him making a new element and the mother of all cliffhangers. Thanks for the experience Arcs.
Nicholas Cummins
2022-04-11 21:51:34 +0000 UTCI do wonder what's happening there, at the end of the chapter. Did he just get a Greater Benevolence Body? Could he create an Elemental Benevolence Domain? Might be his first magnitude 9 spell.
Silerus
2022-04-11 21:17:22 +0000 UTCMust be the dark/destruction in it!
Robbs
2022-04-11 20:41:34 +0000 UTCThe fact that elemental Benevolence is implying someone needs to die is kind of scary. This is really a no-nonsense kind of element, and one that would step on a lot of very powerful toes.
Martin Brandel
2022-04-11 05:43:06 +0000 UTCThank you! it's always nice to get a comment like this.
Arcs
2022-04-11 03:33:40 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter! I absolutely ADORE this story. You are a beyond phenomenal author, and this story hits every single thing I love about fantasy and progression fantasy, in general. The deep magic system, Erick as a person, the character development, the magic!!, your world building, and did I mention: the magic! Its both personal and general, allowing for everyone to find a place and make it their own. I am ever thankful I found your story on RR and am able to support you via patreon and continue reading your work. I don't know if you have plans to publish this as a series, but I would encourage you to do so. A book through kindle or whichever is much more palatable to "normal" people and would let my gushing praise about your work to reach more of my friends than telling them to read it on RR (a site most people havent heard about or care to peruse for whatever reason). All that to say--I love your work, I love Erick as a character, I love your take on a "system" and magic as a whole, and cannot wait to follow this journey for as long as you continue to write it!!
Austin Woodard
2022-04-11 03:28:28 +0000 UTCIt's not even written yet! not a single word
Arcs
2022-04-11 02:13:43 +0000 UTCSimply amazing ty. How much $ to post the next chapter early 🤔
Jake Martin
2022-04-11 01:19:01 +0000 UTCdamn that ended too soon.
twentytoo
2022-04-10 14:16:06 +0000 UTCI always feel so hungry and empty after a chapter because i have to wait another week.
Josh
2022-04-10 09:37:16 +0000 UTCI've never wished for a higher tier more. This cliff is brutal. A lot of big thoughts going on for sure.
Pixelblade
2022-04-10 09:11:04 +0000 UTCTerrific!
Jamie Idle
2022-04-10 09:03:51 +0000 UTCVery nice
Chuck
2022-04-10 07:02:21 +0000 UTCThis was a great chapter. Thank you.
Laevus Deus
2022-04-10 06:50:26 +0000 UTCOh no I need it to be next week immediately
Isaac Boyles
2022-04-10 06:43:02 +0000 UTCErick Flatt in: Time to face the music!
Pheonixarcher
2022-04-10 06:23:40 +0000 UTCAmazing. It is chapters like this one that make this my favorite story.
Cole Terlesky
2022-04-10 06:18:51 +0000 UTC
