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Arcs

So I think I'm missing something here. ______________________________ Erick nodded in agreement. “Pain is not great.” He asked, Ophiel jumped off his perch and landed beside Erick, chirping. ______________________________ It's in the 2nd half of the chapter and I don't see what he asked.

CM

😂: I rather like Rozetta; 'the headmaster' is looking a bit like a boss monster though

Gavriel

It's kinda sad to think that Mel would've been fine if only enough mana had gotten through to cover a few galaxies or so. But also, Rozetta not liking change makes sense, even at the cost of progress. The progress Erick makes is small peanuts compared to the old cosmology, and they lost that. But . . . that's also not treating morals fairly, so if it comes down to a pure confrontation of change or stability, sans the change being directly through killing people, then Erick is not going to be on Rozetta's side. Also, love how he's pissed at her over the potential fate-kidnapping shenanigans and that makes his greeting later on a more negative one. But, like, dude, your messing up the script warning comes with an "ah, we'll be meeting in person anyway" one, which should put any reasonable person on alert.

Cam Hanach

he really needs to GTFO before the swat team arrives and complicates things. Leave a note saying "sorry, didn't realize what this was, trying to do worldly path and...yeah, sry. Roz sez all cool tho." And effing scram.

fbt

Awesome chapter! Thanks :)

CentaureHeart

A worthy death

shabib bin shabib

in college, long ago, I read the entire Dune series (up to chapterhouse, back then) in ~3-4 days (I forget). Lack of sleep and over-immersion took quite a toll; I was talking in short, cryptic sentences w/ multiple meanings (all not very nice) for about a week. Don't try this at home, kids! :)

fbt

Love the long chapters

Martin Brandel

Average novel has like 60k or so. Rest in peace

Josh

You know, as crazy as Mel is, at least he doesn't try to limit Ericks magic. These other gods are so afraid of another sundering they allow their world to fall apart by simple entropy. Vierd needs Erick and Melimazargo.

Overclocked

hello arcs, excellent chapter as usual.if you released a million words one go i will read at least half without sleeping. thanks

shabib bin shabib

thanks for the chapter :)

Corwin Amber

Tftc!

Thank you.

Mike

What I love about your story is that with every chapter I have something new to look forward to. This time it's wizard talks and meeting the wrought party! Thanks for the chapter :)

s476

Oh my, here I was just thinking about this and the post appears. What a treat! Thank you for the chapter!

J Berg

Thank you! I love your story!

eva0ne