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Erick saw the monsters, and the monsters saw hi

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This reads funny in retrospect.

Cam Hanach

Finally some alone time with Erick, I needed that! It's not bad when he's with Poi, Theressa and all the others but sometimes you just need Erick to go ham and just be himself without taking others into account! :P great chapter, great story

Håkan Friberg

I've been anticipating a time-skip for a while now. Is this it? Is it finally here? Has it perhaps been 1 or 10 or a 100 years since Erick disappeared? Find out on next week's episode of Ar'kendrithibihixhicyst!

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You know, after re-reading this chapter, I feel one of the reasons I like it so much is the otherworldness of the Underworld and the core. Whenever you describe the old cosmology, I always compare it to the current one, and I can't help but feel that the old one is so much more fantastical. With this chapter, it was like stepping into a piece of the old cosmology. I hope there is more of that to come.

Overclocked

Oh no. Probably not. But it was done early, so...

Arcs

Saturday uploads from now on?

Pheonixarcher

fixed! thanks

Arcs

Truly a wonderful chapter. Thanks. 'a second second had' <- wierd phrasing, maybe -> 'a second script second had' 'worm’s obvious moments' moments -> movements (i think) 'as she Shaped the' she -> he 'as it felt like' <- doesn't make sense (based on the rest of the sentence) 'overwhelm if he allowed' -> 'overwhelm it if he allowed' 'vibrating hard as brushed' -> 'vibrating hard as it brushed' 'at least three day' day -> days

Corwin Amber

Ah! thank you~

Arcs

After that part though where Erick was waiting for Melimazargo to say something, I thought he was gonna sing the sound of silence to him since he'd probably remember all the words now and it felt appropriate.

Overclocked

Bravo! I think that is my favorite chapter I've read in your series. The duchotomy of that horrible death world followed by that idealic scene. Great!

Overclocked

No. It specifically does not do that. You're probably thinking of Purify, from Delve. [Cleanse] does not clean out digestion or other natural processes because those natural processes get rid of the naturally accumulation of rads inside a person. This is why Sewermasters get rads and dust and stuff from the sewers.

Arcs

Doesn't [Cleanse], you know, negate the need to manually go relieve full bladders and digestive tracts?

Dax

Ophiel seems to be personning harder than usual. Is it real or is Eric just willsoning him.

Robert Amundson

Man, this was a really good chapter. Bit disappointed Eric hasn't made renew yet since he figured it out, but it's probably low on the priority list.

BeatleNerd

I had this mental image Eric blasting through the underworld like an EDM concert, except the lasers are actually blasting everything.

Deegles

Thanks for the chapter

Jack Trowell

Phone a god Eric

Gardor

This is so much weirder and cooler than what I had thought would happen... I can't wait to see what's next!

Niraada


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