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Added 2021-09-12 21:07:39 +0000 UTCFar ahead, hundreds of shaggy cows stepped live
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I think its specifically for ebooks
Martin Brandel
2021-09-13 12:19:10 +0000 UTCThat chapter was going rather well, until it wasn't. Thank you for the chapter, and that terrible twist! Also, that attachment is an .epub, can't really open it without an ebook.
Earfallas Blanc
2021-09-13 07:46:50 +0000 UTCWhat do you mean? Did I miss something?
Earfallas Blanc
2021-09-13 07:45:24 +0000 UTCThis is such a genius intro for the inevitable reckoning with the mind mages. The cat is out of the bag, and even if Erick accepts it, which won't come easily, something needs to be done about the attempted deception and its cost. Their aims are noble and their needs are sympathetic, but they can't be simply treated as an aligned faction anymore. How do you negotiate with the mind mages, when you know that they have... mind magic, and you could be made to forget things, or who knows what else? Is it time for Erick to get some defenses, in response to their breach of trust? What of Poi? Where are his loyalties? Is it possible to know? So many questions and possibilities; all I know is that I'm excited! I've been eager for interactions with the mind mages for a long time. Tftc!
2021-09-13 07:31:22 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Håkan Friberg
2021-09-13 06:55:19 +0000 UTCYeah, that ending though... Hopefully Erick will make his move before it comes to bite him in the ass. Not doing anything? Ouch!
Håkan Friberg
2021-09-13 06:55:05 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Jack Trowell
2021-09-13 06:33:27 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Sad ending though.
Corwin Amber
2021-09-12 22:42:54 +0000 UTCThanks!
s476
2021-09-12 22:15:49 +0000 UTCYikes, just yikes.
Lessthan
2021-09-12 22:08:43 +0000 UTCShit
Josh
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