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“So, yeah. That happened.” Erick said, “And now

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Champion Yetta is in the Greensoil Republic doing important stuff, for sure.

Arcs

I completely forgot. What happened to champion Yeta?

Overclocked

Ahha, she should have tried debating him on magic. No one believes that he'd do with, what, cleanse, grow, teleport, but not Ward Light even. Maybe I'm forgetting a few, but no need at all for the attack ones. He could probably be convinced to leave in personal wards to prevent accidents.

Cam Hanach

The volume of a sphere is V=(4/3)πr^3, which means that at half a kilometer diameter for Erick's own [Spatial Denial], we have volume of .52 cubic kilometers. The volume of Ygg's [SD] is twice as wide as the lake, which is 3 km wide, so 3km is the radius of Ygg's [SD], which gives 113 cubic kilometers. meaning that ygg's power, with that spell, is roughly 220 times larger than erick's.

Arcs

Great as always but numbers and proportions are kinda off. The lake was 3km wide when you discussed the width of the root (which was 2km) then the lake was 55km in size when you discussed the size of one of the wards. The one that was 220 times bigger than Ericks. Doesn't add up. If we assume it's pretty round in shape its either 3 or 55km in diameter. And the tree is a bush. 2km wide root, 2km high with first first branches only 90m up? That's one robust and pretty low bush extremely out of proportions :P (edit: in my mind Yggdrasil is a rather wide oak, with massive branches)

Håkan Friberg

My god Koori is obnoxious, being civilised doesn't cost her anything and she is still rude AF to Erick... whatever. Thanks for the chapter, it was great

Alex Woolfson

He does acknowledge he’s a bit broken in the middle of this chapter. Seems like he’s continuing forward and doing his best to cope with the horrors that have affected what is, at its core, a kind, pacifist man.

Oliver Wolfe

Oh? mm... how so?

Arcs

That last part made me feel all sorts of weird

TayTay, The Pirate Queen

The MC's personality seems kinda borked lately, maybe it's just how I read it. Kinda gives the vibe of all the power going to his head, only caring about others in a very limited way (do I think I did good? yes? ok, fuck everyone.). Lots of little hints of craziness that may not be there? idk. He's just getting weird, and his empathy from earlier seems to have been entirely replaced with some internal pseudo-objective moral scorekeeping. Mostly it seems like hints of early stages of either/both a) going power mad, and/or b) just completely losing touch (whether with others, with normalcy, or several other possibilities). IDK, it's just been increasingly reading oddly to me. I'm glad he's past his starting thoughtless denial/hypocritical nonsense, but I'm unsure of where he's heading as a person lately, I guess? Maybe I'm misreading it, tho?

fbt

'course Iwas there' Iwas -> I was

Corwin Amber

Erick is very uniquely suited for having that argument, coming from a land with no magic.

David Hall

Thanks, arcs!

Robbs


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