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Added 2021-08-15 21:46:40 +0000 UTCErick had promised that he would stay in his gu
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But is he jumping at shadows or jumping at Shadows?
Pixelblade
2021-08-20 07:44:59 +0000 UTCBit late, but he'd best thank Melemizargo for saving Janes life next time he sees him. Or just, you know, whenever he calms down from thinking he's going to die and stops jumping at shadows.
Cam Hanach
2021-08-19 10:29:54 +0000 UTCthank you!
Arcs
2021-08-17 23:14:29 +0000 UTCDamn, you're fast. Also, I just want to say that your story is pretty fantastic. Every time a new(absurdly, impressively, long) chapter comes out I know I have a lot of enjoyable reading ahead. So, thanks, and I hope writing it brings you joy.
Jump 'N Shoot Man
2021-08-17 07:26:01 +0000 UTCwhoopsie! I'll... fix this
Arcs
2021-08-17 07:04:47 +0000 UTCTiny continuity error. This chapter and 153 both have a scene of Erick giving Warzi the new personal charm. 153 His little brother, Warzi, was doing a lot better. After Erick handed over one of his new [Personal Ward]-sized [Delirium Charm]s, Warzi started crying with happiness. 154 He gave his new [Personal Delirium Charm] over to Warzi, Hangzi’s brother, and had them install a little box somewhere for him to place a new charm into every 10 days. The little tyke loved the new version even more than the first [Delirium Charm].
Jump 'N Shoot Man
2021-08-17 07:00:18 +0000 UTCDoes erick know about water bears? He may not be able to create immortality, but he can probably get pretty close.
Pheonixarcher
2021-08-17 00:26:49 +0000 UTCThanks!
Håkan Friberg
2021-08-16 12:37:08 +0000 UTCWhatever version of [Inviolable Defense] she'll try to get, it will have to be classified as a (body contained) Domain to not be compromised by enemy domains. And Erik knows it
Seijax
2021-08-16 08:21:23 +0000 UTCI was thinking the same thing. Or at least get into his pants! Haha
Ion
2021-08-16 05:29:11 +0000 UTCPrediction: she wants to marry him, either for political reasons or admiration.
Draddock
2021-08-16 03:48:24 +0000 UTCfixed all around. thanks!
Arcs
2021-08-16 01:43:08 +0000 UTC'that desperately needed' -> 'that he desperately needed' 'Mana Altered into Void' Altered -> Altering OR it needs brackets around it for spell like [Mana Altered] 'Not sure to help' <- awkward phrasing
Corwin Amber
2021-08-16 01:28:42 +0000 UTCPoor Erick— here’s hoping he starts working on an [EMDR] or other [Trauma Therapy].
singletrack
2021-08-16 00:10:21 +0000 UTC
