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Thanks for the chapter!!! I'm really curious about Warzi, looking forward to seeing what Erick does about him and how it develops ^^.

Earfallas Blanc

I get emails from my Google account where they tell me that the chapter just came out, but also sending me the chapter in the email, so I can just read them there (not like I do that, I read on my computer).

Earfallas Blanc

I thought so too! Perhaps right at the end of Ar'kendrythis, when Phagar gives him the "Burn bright to vanish the darkness" or something spell?

Earfallas Blanc

Thanks for the chapter. As a remark on the length, would it be possible to join a pdf version of your chapters to your post? Because on mobile it takes a lot of time to load and makes Patreon crash semi-frequently. Still love the novel tough and I’ll read it regardless.

Shade

tbh I hate the whole cultivation novel shtick and the overbaked cliches, but as an interlude it's not that bad, and I'm very, very glad it's not written in the prose style common to such novels (which makes me barf). If I had to read a bit of story in such a setting, this is a very good compromise.

fbt

Thanks for the chapter!

Love all the interactions with all the "young masters"! Thank you!

Martin Brandel

Has Erick rejected Phagar’s championship? I thought it was still undecided? Great chapter!

mr sparks

'she could figure' could OR would? just checking 'we got monsters' we -> we've (unless it was intentional) 'far before now' far -> long 'and waited for dinner' waited -> wait

Corwin Amber

Loved the healing part

s476

Thanks for the chapter!

s476

Looking forward to "true terror"

s476


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