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Thanks!
Håkan Friberg
2021-06-21 11:29:36 +0000 UTC'that necessity right yet' -> 'that necessity yet'
Corwin Amber
2021-05-02 19:20:31 +0000 UTCHow long till Erik figures out that he is the reason the "rains are late?"
Lessthan
2021-04-19 22:27:28 +0000 UTCFun fact! they were originally going to be based on the scottish highlands. The execution of the original idea got far away from those roots, tho. : )
Arcs
2021-04-19 17:44:18 +0000 UTCIt reminded me of Galadriel's temptation. A moment where he could seize the terrible power and make himself master of the world.
Lessthan
2021-04-19 16:07:39 +0000 UTCThe scene where he thought about changing the world with his blessing of empathy really reminded me of a certain scene in the last book of The Wheel of Time. Thanks for the chapter.
Pixelblade
2021-04-19 09:48:00 +0000 UTCA pity he changed from Elias to Ezekiel, I rather liked the name. Exotic. Thank you for the chapter! I'm pretty excited for this next part of his journey. Did you base the Songli Higlands on East Asia?
Earfallas Blanc
2021-04-19 07:47:36 +0000 UTCThis will be explored more later.
Arcs
2021-04-18 22:22:49 +0000 UTCGood descriptions! I also always povs of others about erics power, as it seems so casual from him. So perspective is always nice
s476
2021-04-18 21:52:17 +0000 UTCI think you could do a better job at drawing a distinction between hunters instinct's Eric and normal Eric, cuz reading him be scatter brained and introspective in combat is annoying for a bunch of reasons.
Gardor
2021-04-18 21:44:58 +0000 UTCYes yes, an update!
Karn Lorren
2021-04-18 20:48:52 +0000 UTC
