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Added 2020-11-22 21:11:15 +0000 UTC“So. Violet.” Erick calmed the rage crawling ov
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When Erick's trip into Ar'Kendrithyst is done, that is the end of book 4.
Arcs
2020-11-23 22:42:01 +0000 UTCTo me it feels like Eric is on a slippery downward slope. Sometimes resisting but sometimes sprinting down. If it goes on like this nobody has to turn him into a shade he will turn himself into a shade. As it is right now he will dismiss anything out of hand even if it is good. It feels like he completely forgot that people even Shades are more than black and white. Yes they are screwed up and probably deserve to die. But even screwed up people can have a good idea every now and then. It feels as if one day Eric might wake up and realize he does not like the person he turned into. I at least find this rigidness concerning. This dealing in absolutes. I agree that most of the shades deserve to die. But what about all the other people we learned are there. He is completely obsessed with the Shades. Also as we saw this chapter people do not need to be shades to be screwed up. Even if all Shades disappeared. Then other people would fill the void. And on void, can Eric merely not visually shadow as abstract, and keeps thinking of it as absence of light and absence turns to void?
Cerdaemon
2020-11-23 16:05:18 +0000 UTCAre we nearing the end of the novel? I ask because it kind of feels like Eric has become a bit of a transcendant being with his domain and new stats. Interesting chapter. PS: I really want to see him make a prismatic version of lodestar.
Pixelblade
2020-11-23 13:14:36 +0000 UTCBrutal and efficient. Great story! Thanks for another wonderful chapter.
Scott Frederiksen
2020-11-23 02:12:05 +0000 UTCfixed! thanks
Arcs
2020-11-23 00:21:03 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter 'then deserved way worse' -> 'then they deserved way worse'
Corwin Amber
2020-11-23 00:04:22 +0000 UTC
