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The North River flowed up from below the Lower

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I love Arkendrithyst adventuring. Amazing! Although, ripping away 27,000 points of personal ward from one attack seems kind of insane. Like if Hollowsaur had done that twice Eric would just be dead?? Feels a bit strange that Erik didn't have anything ready to answer that sort of attack.

Me too. And how everybody kind of stands around going "wat?" for a minute, including Erik. Priceless. If I were a Shade, I would kill Erik for that, untouchable or not. Imagine a case of enchanted diamonds, each one an eternal prison for a conscious-the-whole-time Shade. (Oh! what if they acted as Stat stones! Solve the fading of the enchantment, work them into jewelry, and a thousand years from now a calamity kicks off because someone nicked the wrong spot on their heirloom adventuring gear. (Oh! work them all into a single crown, the [Leaden Crown of the Dark Choir] ) )

Lessthan

Wow. Just... Wow. This sure is exciting, but you can also feel the horror, both from Eric's overt thoughts and from the little things. I've been on the edge of my seat the whole chapter. By the way! Happy 111 chapter, and thanks for the early one too.

Earfallas Blanc

fixed! thanks

Arcs

she's speaking kinda fast, and it's not completely proper, so i'm going to leave that as is. thanks tho.

Arcs

thanks for the chapter 'you’ve seemed to have' -> 'you seem to have'

Corwin Amber

i love that he trapped the shade. Then his buddies show up like ok wait just wait a minute here.

Alchemy

Thanks for the chapter!

Zoe Weinstein

"They’re chances of survival" they're --> their

loimprevisto

Why not both? : )

Arcs

"Riding the back of a leviathan, as the great monster tore through the waves of Lake Leviathan" was she trying to be poetic, or is that why it's called Lake Leviathan?

Thomas Fisk

Thanks for the chapter!

Craig


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