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Added 2020-10-22 22:36:49 +0000 UTCThe North River flowed up from below the Lower
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I love Arkendrithyst adventuring. Amazing! Although, ripping away 27,000 points of personal ward from one attack seems kind of insane. Like if Hollowsaur had done that twice Eric would just be dead?? Feels a bit strange that Erik didn't have anything ready to answer that sort of attack.
2020-10-23 17:47:53 +0000 UTCMe too. And how everybody kind of stands around going "wat?" for a minute, including Erik. Priceless. If I were a Shade, I would kill Erik for that, untouchable or not. Imagine a case of enchanted diamonds, each one an eternal prison for a conscious-the-whole-time Shade. (Oh! what if they acted as Stat stones! Solve the fading of the enchantment, work them into jewelry, and a thousand years from now a calamity kicks off because someone nicked the wrong spot on their heirloom adventuring gear. (Oh! work them all into a single crown, the [Leaden Crown of the Dark Choir] ) )
Lessthan
2020-10-23 17:19:03 +0000 UTCWow. Just... Wow. This sure is exciting, but you can also feel the horror, both from Eric's overt thoughts and from the little things. I've been on the edge of my seat the whole chapter. By the way! Happy 111 chapter, and thanks for the early one too.
Earfallas Blanc
2020-10-23 11:38:16 +0000 UTCfixed! thanks
Arcs
2020-10-23 08:03:15 +0000 UTCshe's speaking kinda fast, and it's not completely proper, so i'm going to leave that as is. thanks tho.
Arcs
2020-10-23 08:03:06 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter 'you’ve seemed to have' -> 'you seem to have'
Corwin Amber
2020-10-23 08:01:00 +0000 UTCi love that he trapped the shade. Then his buddies show up like ok wait just wait a minute here.
Alchemy
2020-10-23 07:40:47 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Zoe Weinstein
2020-10-22 23:27:41 +0000 UTC"They’re chances of survival" they're --> their
loimprevisto
2020-10-22 23:24:13 +0000 UTCWhy not both? : )
Arcs
2020-10-22 23:18:58 +0000 UTC"Riding the back of a leviathan, as the great monster tore through the waves of Lake Leviathan" was she trying to be poetic, or is that why it's called Lake Leviathan?
Thomas Fisk
2020-10-22 23:15:59 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Craig
2020-10-22 22:37:36 +0000 UTC