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From high above, in the grey, cloudy sky, Erick

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First time in a while that I've cared about about one of the side POVs over Eric's.

PrimalShadow

fixed! i just deleted the curse curse

Arcs

'tried to work before' -> 'tried to work with before' 'meetings were one' -> were -> where 'Syllea looked too' -> 'Syllea also looked at' (or something similar) 'cast that Ophiel' (this sounds awkward/wrong) 'not a curse curse' -> 'not a cursed curse' (i think you meant this...?)

Corwin Amber

I think I see slips game now. Erick is probably pretty close on his guesses and slip wants to keep as many as shadelings as possible to further Melemizargos plans.

Althaelus

ha!

Arcs

you havent surrounded me, you have placed me in a target rich environment!

Alchemy

Excellent

Wyatt


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