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The crown reminds me of the iron crown of Morgoth (from LotR), which in the game Angband, grants +50 to all stats. Clearly, Erick's version is superior though!

fixed, thanks!

Arcs

That was a fantastic chapter!

Monomatopoeia

"turning off is" - > "turning off his"

Monomatopoeia

Tick Tock, Tick Tock Turn back the clock Let me converse with those long lost Tick Tok, turn back the clock. Erick did not even get to see the blue screen as is a flash of golden light he was gone. He arrives just prior to the sundering. He has no screen, he knows his spells. He meets the half angel lady and her class of students. He gets the answer form her after explaining who he is, how he arrived here, and what is about to happen. He cannot bare the thought of letting them die so he in a moment he devises a spell most grand. He speaks and the world listens. He creates the spell, Area of temporal distortion. He selects the entire classroom. They are all removed from time, but still able to observe its passage. The space they are in is timeless. Here the half angel is safe from the new rules of magic. Erick walks from the area of the spell and arrives at his home. He alone holds the key. He has saved souls destined to be destroyed from their ultimate fate. I hope you like something from this.

Alchemy

Tick Tok, Tick Tok, Turn back the clock, let my converse with those from long ago, to learn secrets lost, tick tok, turn back the clock.

Alchemy

thanks for reading! Only one typo this time, too. I ended up changing that whole sentence to make it better.

Arcs

fixed, thanks!

Arcs

Soul -> South

PrimordialJay

Aiee! Now Erik is caught up in their game for good as he's going to have to defend Candlepoint against all and sundry.

Conrad Wong

thanks for the chapter

Corwin Amber

'and peanuts to the list' and -> add

Corwin Amber

This chapter definitely drew me in and had me on the edge of my seat, but I'm also getting real sick of Bulgan getting the better of Eric. Especially with EVERYONE shrugging it off when Eric comes to them asking about the weird powers that shades have. They have teleport in/out on lockdown? Yeah they do that. No idea how. Can I use light magic against them? Don't do that,it makes them stronger strangely enough. How strong do I need to be to defeat a shade? *While gesturing at a countryside covered in a firestorm* Stronger! They break the rules on dispelling? This has not been asked yet but I get the feeling it will get the same treatment. I will admit that a bit of this rant is driven by my frustration that Eric pretty much gave Bulgan exactly what he wanted. Pretty sure we all saw it coming, and thats almost more infuriating! Having said that, if Eric ever beats them at their own game of forcing them into doing something because it's in their nature it will be very satisfying. Or will it. Because shades have been built up into this "you can't beat them at their own game" sort of faction I honestly can't imagine what a win actually really looks like against them. Its wonderful writing, but stressful as he'll to be caught in the middle of it while unfinished.

Kapelteta

I always thought that Candlepoint was too much Erick's personal Hell to not involve him in some way.

Luis Costa

Holy shit....

Gygax Fan